Aids - Essay 5

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AIDS
Introductory Paragraph
Begin with an interesting quotation related to your opinion about Aids My opinion about aids is that it is a very deadly disease, but completely preventable disease.

(You will need a transition here)
- End the Intro paragraph with your thesis statement:
Even though that aids is transmitted, it effects millions of people in America because and That millions of people in America have AIDS.

Body Paragraph #1
Topic of the body thesis:
That aids is transmitted
- Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph. - Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that That aids is transmitted is... - Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph. - Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence. Body Paragraph #2

Even though That aids is transmitted, It effects millions of people in america because . - Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph. - Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence

Another example that shows that is...
- Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph. - Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence. Body Paragraph #3

The most important reason It effects millions of people in america is because That millions of people in america have AIDS. - Find evidence - like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it upor support the topic sentence of this paragraph. - Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence

Another example that shows that That millions of people in america have AIDS is... - Find more evidence - facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or...
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