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A Personal Narrative On A Journey
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My trip started out one day when we wanted to go to six flags. My sister, mom, and I packed up and decided to go the next day. We all woke up pretty early and we were excited to get there, we got in the car and left. We took off from home and got on to the highway. The highway was kind of busy with cars going everywhere and all the other places, the trip was going to take a few hours or two to get there so we brought some food and snacks, we was all ready to be there. We finally get there and it was very hot and sunny that day. The sun felt like we could almost melt because, the temperature was so hot. We get in with our season passes and I was still tired from our trip there and they already wanted to go ride a rollercoaster. I got a map and they chose a
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It made me jump and I heard my sister screaming with her eyes shut and my mom laughing because, she was scared of it. It was very fun and I would suggest the ride for other people to try too. The second we get off that ride I decide we should get something to eat. There was this place that had huge turkey legs and I would suggest it to everyone because, it was really good. They had Corn on the Cobb too which looked really good. My mom chose to go on another ride and so I said “ok” and I went and picked one called; “The Boss” it was huge and we had to climb a lot of stairs to get up there to it and it was all wooden looking. We get up there and there was a big line of people but we got in pretty quick. We sit in the rollercoaster and they guy told us “there won’t be any flips, tricks, or any surprises” but when the ride took off he said “maybe just a few.” The ride starts out and we climb a huge slope going up and up. We get to the top and it looks like we can see across the world because, we were up so high and above all the trees I could see and all of a sudden we drop. We speeded down the track and took a lot of twists and turns and it jerked out

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