Examples Of Improving Thesis Statements · The War of 1812 came before the American Civil War. (Bad example) · The War of 1812 set into motion the main events that caused the American Civil War. (Good example) · The judicial system needs to have power over Congress in order to do its job. (Bad example) · In order for the judicial system to judge whether a law is constitutional‚ it must have the power to overturn a temporary law of Congress. (Good example) · People need to stay healthy for
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and young alike‚ experiment with prescription drugs for various reasons. They think that it will make them have more fun‚ lose weight‚ fit in‚ and even be more efficient in their everyday lives. Prescription drugs are only safe for the person that they are prescribed to because a doctor has examined these people and they are being treated for a specific ailment or condition. {draw:frame} “Prescription drugs are the second most commonly abused category of drugs such as heroine‚ methamphetamines
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would begin my introduction with background information about organ donation/transplantation like when it first came into the medical field‚ as well as what were its major milestones in history so far. I would introduce my thesis in the introduction paragraph. My thesis statement is‚ organ transplants have revolutionized medicine and have become a major part of saving a human life and there should be more organ donors each year to help contribute to this great cause and keep on saving human lives.
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however‚ are more complicated. Besides inspiring his audience to see a problem and make a difference‚ what were Beavan’s motivations for living his year carbon-neutral‚ and how did his motivations evolve? For your second paper‚ your will formulate a thesis that answers this question. Keep in mind that there is more than one answer. Consider a few of the following issues Beavan faced before this year began: his guilt over his own family’s consumption‚ his relationship to his environment (New York
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Problem and Solution Essay Outline Tentative Title: Homeless pets I. Introduction Thesis statement: The government started putting all its efforts into solving this issue to keep the citizens safe and find appropriate solutions which could potentially solve the problem of homeless pets completely. III. Solution One - The first solution that seems to be the most useful or the most adequate‚ is assistance in finding new owners or finding shelters and kennels for stray animals. A. Advantages: 1. No
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but then later discovered to be Beatrice Sparks‚ is a commonly challenged book that educates young adults about the effects of drug abuse. Go Ask Alice follows the life of a common teenage girl and her struggle with addiction and mental diseases. Therefore‚ it is a very educational book for teens for teens to learn the reality of drugs. Because Go Ask Alice does involve drugs‚ alcohol‚ and sexual content‚ it should be banned for specific age groups. Go Ask Alice is debated on if it is appropriate for
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English 12 Research Essay Proposal Ashley Jeffers Overview: My thesis will be that the children’s TV show Sesame Street‚ despite the attempts to make children learn from a young age actually questions some opinions with the changes that it occurs. Sesame Street is an extremely popular children’s TV show in America since the 1970.‚ and has a huge impact on children growing up. Changes have been made to certain characters that have affect of stereotyping certain people. Despite the changes that
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by the characters in the book. The theme of individuality is shown by Equality 7-2621.Anthem is a novel about a man who overruled the government to gain knowledge of the outside world. My thesis statement is every individual should be their own person and have in control of themselves. One example of my thesis is when Equality 7-2621 left the city and decided what was best for him and his family. Equality 7-2621 tells us that the word "we" is illegal to mankind. Equality 7-2621 has escaped
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Sonny’s Blues is an excellent depiction of how artists often use drugs in order to enhance their musical genius. By ingesting a drug to alter their state of conscious‚ they allow the narcotic to create usually obscure connections in the brain to become prominent and overactive. The setting of the story takes place in Harlem‚ a neighborhood often associated with crime and drugs. However‚ it is also known to produce successful poets and musicians. The question is‚ could these factors be possibly
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Reasons for the Outcome of the Tiananmen Square Protests of 1989 Topic and Thesis Statement In April 1989‚ people from all over China gathered in Beijing’s Tiananmen Square to mourn the death of the Communist Party Leader Hu Yaobang. The gathering grew larger each day and more and more people expressed their dissatisfaction with the party. People could not see the results of the reforms that they had been promised and students‚ in particular‚ were agitated due to the rising corruption in the party
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