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Accountability and the Importance of Taking Care of Your Equipment "Accountability" stems from late Latin accomptare‚ meaning to account. Accountability in the military is the obligation imposed by law or lawful order or regulation on an officer or other person for keeping accurate record of property‚ documents‚ or funds. The person having this obligation may or may not have actual possession of the property‚ documents‚ or funds. Accountability is concerned primarily with records‚ while responsibility
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misunderstands the meaning of the words military discipline. He thinks of them as being connected with punishments or reprimands which may result from the violation of some military law or regulation. Actually‚ discipline should not be something new to you for you have been disciplined all of your life. You were being disciplined at home and in school when you were taught obedience to your parents and teachers‚ and respect for the rights of others. On your baseball or other athletic team you were
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Losing Your Sense Of Smell One thing that would happen if you could no longer smell‚ is that your sense of taste would diminish greatly. You would be able to distinguish between sweet‚ salty‚ bitter and sour‚ but more subtle tastes depend on smell‚ so you would not be able to recognize any other tastes. For instance‚ you would not be able to tell the difference between chocolate‚ strawberry or vanilla ice cream‚ you would only know that they all taste sweet. This problem would prevent you from
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there has been a huge controversy over‚ should kids (especially younger ones) get participation trophies? I believe that kids should earn their trophies and not just get a trophy for showing up. Ashley Merryman‚ New York City author of a book titled “Losing is Good for You” says that she would rather have kids realize that there are no stakes than in their late teens- early 20s learn that not everyone is going to give them rewards just for participating (Website 2). Giving kids trophies for showing up
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Losing Tim clearly portrayed the importance of advocacy on behalf of the client and his/her family. Paul and his family were fully invested in Tim’s success and access to proper treatment. Since the family was involved‚ the providers should have had an easy time providing for Tim. Instead‚ they failed to commit to verbal and written agreements nor did they adequately serve the family. The shortcomings in the policies and laws can cause families to feel helpless and discouraged. It seemed as though
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The Losing Battle Obesity has been an upcoming battle in the United States. According to Healthgoods.com one in three Americans ageing from 20yrs to 70yrs is facing obesity problems. Also at Healthgoods.com it states that not just the adults who are facing these problems‚ but children ageing from 6yrs up to 17 yrs range about one in five who are over weight. Having the will to loose those extra pounds in order to look and feel better is a powerful tool in the fight against obesity. Obesity
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The id‚ according to Freud’s theory of personality‚ is present at birth‚ and thus is the first system of personality development. It is the foundation that includes all instincts while deriving energy from bodily processes. Theoretically‚ the id works according to what is known as the ’pleasure principle’. Through this principle‚ pain is avoided to seek pleasure‚ and can be achieved through the process of reflex actions and the primary process. Reflexes are known to be physical actions that act on
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reasons for a person to be stabilized‚ especially when you are having or planning for a family. When one has a job‚ you make money that can sustain your needs or wants and provide everything the person and whole family’s desire. But what if all of a sudden‚ lose the job? What would be the effects of losing one’s job to you and to the family? The effects of losing a job can affect the whole family a lot. The most immediate and devastating impacts of job loss are loss of normal income‚ grief and deep anxiety
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To receive the self-esteem that children need‚ they must be praised. Kori Ellis‚ writer of “The Importance of Praising Your Kids”‚ declares that children should be told how wonderful they are everyday. “Self-esteem expert Jack Canfield of Chicken Soup for the Soul fame often cites a study that says 80 percent of children entering school in the first grade scored high on the self-esteem inventory . . . [and] by the time they graduated high school‚ that number was down to just 5 percent.” The majority
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