It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should
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Child Obesity: How Society Supersizes Kids By Linda Lents Celeste Brown English 102: #28440 November 10‚ 2012 Linda Lents Celeste Brown English 102: #28440 November 10‚ 2012 Childhood Obesity: How Society Super Sizes Kids Most Americans learn about nutrition from the media. Because food is a very large business and because everyone eats every day‚ the public is fascinated by stories about diet and health. Newspapers‚ magazines and television produce and distribute
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popular footballer in Moscow region. I want to read the essay About me essay is an exercise that is given to students so that they can learn writing on different topics. It is the first step of writing‚ when you will learn to write about yourself‚ you will also learn about writing other topics. For writing about me essay‚ all you have to know is your own self. The essay about myself comes under the category of narrative essays. In about me essay‚ you have to include the details of your life such as
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After thinking for quite a while about what topic to write this diagnostic essay on‚ I decided to write about one week I volunteer at a kid’s day camp during the summer. I would show up every morning while the dew was still clinging to the blades of grass at Blythe Park. I would arrive an hour before everyone else to prepare the circles of safety and to collect tinder that would litter the ground under the giant pines. The circle of safety was about a 2-foot diameter circle of bricks I would order
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Through analysis‚ I found that the most significant concept in this essay was that it was the greediness that Americans had that truly inspired suburbia‚ or as Brooks had stated‚ “conservative utopias‚ where people go because they imagine orderly and perfect that can be led there” (65). In relation to the Great Depression
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Stranger in the Photo is Me Essay “Say cheese‚” says my mom and click‚ this moment is saved forever. And now taking a photo allows a moment in time to be kept in remembrance. Photos are objects that are cherished; they hold memories‚ both good and bad. Photos allow us to remember the lessons and experiences that make us who we are today. INSERT REST OF PARAGRAPH Looking through my photos in attempt to age one of them‚ I chose this one specifically because this was the only picture that truly
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thought 2. Knowing B. Final Words VI. Conclusion An Explication of William Stafford’s “Ask Me” The poem “Ask Me” is not as it may seem the first time you read it‚ you have to read through it a second maybe even a third time in order to take notes about the true meaning that Stafford is trying to get across. William Stafford gives us a paraphrase of his own poem “Ask Me”‚ giving the reader a look into what the poem means to him. By giving us the reader a more in depth explanation
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Places That Shaped Me When a person thinks of their geologic location‚ they think of where they are on the Earth. A geographer would say that is one part of a location‚ space‚ the other concept of a location is place. When actually defining a sense of space there has to be an exact coordinate and distance to an area. Place on the other hand is the infusing of a location with meaning and emotion. It is important to have both of these aspects to a location because it defines where it is physically
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Homework Task By Gillian Ferguson The film Stand By Me directed by Rob Reiner explores ideas of both physical and inner journeys. The plot revolves around four 12 year old boy’s journey to find the body of a missing boy. Through this quest each of the characters goes through an inner journey and grows emotionally. The filmmaker uses a variety of techniques to illustrate the theme of journey including voiceover narration‚ metaphors and flashbacks. The film is told through voice-over narration
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The theater Lend Me a Tenor is ta comedy work of Ken Ludwig‚ a famous American playwright. The show’s first performance on Broadway in 1989 was a huge success. It has been translated into sixteen languages so far and has been staged around the world for a long time‚ considered the highest representative of Broadway comedies. The author narrated the story with combination of climactic and episodic plot construction‚ in which there are lots of people and events‚ and there exists some parallel plots
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