| Thesis statement is not very effective because of lack of clarity and not being concise. Is too general or broad. | Thesis statement is somewhat effective‚ but could be more clear and/or concise. May be too general or broad. | Thesis statement is effective‚ clear‚ and concise while telling exactly what the paper is about. | Thesis statement is extremely effective‚ clear‚ and concise while telling exactly what the paper is about. | Body Paragraphs | | 6
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the Surrounding Area Facts about Mt. Everest Height of the mountain How the mountain was named Peak XV Joloungma (Tibetan name) Sagarmatha (Nepalese name) The number of people who have climbed Everest to date Major Explorers Covered in this Paper Sir Edmund Hillary First to reach the summit (1953) Led a team of experienced mountain climbers who worked together Tenzing Norgay and the Sherpas Norgay was an experienced climber and guide who accompanied Hillary Sherpas still used to guide
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Ashley Teschendorf English IV Mrs.Bee Outline Thesis Statement: The birth of every child is a complex process. Neonatal nurses have been around for decades to be by a patient’s side during the birth of a newborn child. Neonatal nurses take care of premature babies during the duration of their stay at a hospital. Neonatal nurses can also be categorized as neonatal or pediatric nurses depending on the age group they serve. I: History A: Kennedys baby Patrick’s death. B: How it
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War In the Pacific: The Battle of Iwo Jima Thesis Statement: During WWII‚ the United States explored island hopping as a strategy to defeat the Japanese. The military exchange at Iwo Jima led to a victory for America and helped us gain fields and momentum in the war. Background: Iwo Jima was under Japanese control until March in 1945‚ when it became the scene of a bloody battle between Japanese and invading U.S. troops during the last phases of World War II. Americans made new plans to attack
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Storyboarding For Instruc+onal Design Robert Rector What is Storyboarding? • “Storyboards are visual organizers‚ typically a series of illustra+ons displayed in sequence for the purpose of pre-‐visualizing a video‚ web-‐based training‚ or interac+ve media sequence.” – h"p://www.instruc/onaldesign.org/ storyboarding.html The Story of Storyboarding • Where did storyboards
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Melvin Garcia 07/19/2011 Written Analysis #3‚ Chapter 4 I. Introduction Thesis Statement: Professional athletes who perform solely for society’s entertainment are undeservingly overpaid for their talents. These highly skilled athletes contribute relatively little to making society better like many other Samaritan careers which are overlooked and poorly paid. These people are true role models‚ not athletes. Fans contribute highly to the athletes’ salaries. A. Major proposition or premise
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Last updated: March 13‚ 08 SAMPLE ABSTRACT OUTLINE An abstract should briefly: • (Re)-establish the topic of the research project. • Give the research problem and/or main objective of the project (this usually comes first). • Indicate the methodology used. • Present the main findings. • Present the main conclusions See suggestions below‚ but also visit the section “EXAMPLES” at http://www.languages.ait.ac.th/el21abst.htm 1. Word limit: An abstract (including a bibliography or examples
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of Manor Farm take the farm over from their master‚ they create seven commandments that are all broken by none other than Animal Farm’s own leaders. Yes‚ all of these are eventually broken‚ but some of them are more prominent than the rest. Thesis Statement: The main commandments that are broken in the book are: “no animal shall drink alcohol”‚ “no animal shall kill any other animal”‚ and “all animals are equal”. Claim 1: The fifth commandment is that “no animal shall drink alcohol”
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Purpose Statement: Reading this book‚ which is for teens who stutter‚ provides the reader with practical knowledge pertaining to the onset of stuttering‚ how to cope with stuttering (feelings associated with stuttering)‚ and options to treat or improve fluency if wanted. Key Words: • Tension Key Statements: • If you find yourself avoiding speaking‚ or even avoiding participating in some activities‚ your world is revolving around stuttering. • You already know the bad news- there’s no cure
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The life death and effect of Mahalia Jackson Rene Elvir-Navas Ms. Domond English 3 Period 2 Elvir-Navas 1 THESIS STATEMENT: “The queen of gospel”‚ Mahalia Jackson had an enormous impact on many different phases‚ such as religion and history. Elvir-Navas 2 The life death and effect of Mahalia Jackson: Throughout her important career‚ Mahalia Jackson used her powerful voice and inspiring interpretation of spirituals to move audiences around the world. Even though
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