homeless responded to a letter to the Mayor to arrange a meeting with the public. The strengths‚ weaknesses‚ and revision recommendations will be explored. In reviewing this letter there are many strengths. First‚ the greeting and professional tone are appropriate‚ as well as‚ the clear expectations of the letter. It was a professional decision to respond to a letter from the Mayor with respect. Furthermore‚ grammar and capitalization were both consistently correct. The letter was nicely written
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Adolph 1 Fashion Magazine Editor Lauren Adolph SOAR Mr. Steinhauser December 8‚ 2014 Adolph 2 Today‚ fashion magazines have become a necessity for many and that is all thanks to the magazine editor. The magazine editor goes through a long process to structure and create the finished product. Magazine editors have become iconic for their fashion sense. As said on Inside Jobs ‚ “... [they] create an overall vision for what [their] publication will feature
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Dear Nadhirah‚ How are you? I hope you’re in the pink of health. It’s been a pretty long time since I last write you a letter. I do have the guts to do so but my time was always packed with homeworks and school activities. Do you know that last month was my birthday? My father took our whole family on a vacation for a weekend as my birthday present. I was so axcited when he informed us that we’d visit the famous Jeju Island located in South Korea as it was my dream place vacation after
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“The Tell Tale Heart” by Edgar Allan Poe is a traumatizing story about a person who murdered an innocent old man because he thought that his eye was evil. The story states that the narrator was afraid of the eye and that is why he wanted to rid himself of it. The narrator had many signs of being proven to go to jail or to go to a mental hospital. The narrator planned out the murder long before he did it. As he was about to explain how he completed his task‚ he sounded quite proud. He did make sure
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one million casualties occur. In the book Soldier’s Heart by Gary Paulsen‚ Charley Goddard volunteers to serve in the Civil War. When he first enlists‚ he is fifteen and just a boy. By the time the war ends and he returns home‚ he becomes a man with a “soldier’s heart” meaning he is changed mentally because of the things he sees in the war. Over the course of the war‚ Charley has experiences that change him into a man. When Charley hears about a “shooting war‚” he gets caught up in all the hype
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I am writing this letter in response to Ms Jacob’s recent article. After reading her story‚ I’ve changed my mind about slavery. I knew it wasn’t okay‚ but I didn’t know exactly how it was. Now that I understand more about this‚ I feel the need to speak out about it. Ms Jacobs is a former slave who chose to share her experience as a slave. She explained how hard it is to be one‚ and the things they have to go through everyday: abuse‚ fear‚ sexual harassment and exploitation. I know many of you don’t
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Hey‚ I am writing this letter as a hope of a solution to the problem of students losing good‚ valuable education time during the summer vacation and other vacations. Educators are proposing the idea that students should go to school all year round and shortening the breaks during the year. I think that this is an acceptable‚ yet bad idea. There are a few ways in which this can hurt the students and their educations. There would be problems with getting stressed out and over loading them with
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Animal Farm Text Response Essay James Ramm George Orwell’s Animal Farm is a novella which is about a group of animals who rebel against their cruel master‚ but are soon overcome by corruption. In the text‚ George Orwell illustrates to reader that this corruption of the original ideals in Animal Farm was caused by this greed and hunger for power. Greed in George Orwell’s novella Animal Farm is a main
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1 Jenny Lum 10/10/14 Period 1 "Letter From Birmingham Jail" Essay Response Martin Luther King Jr. wrote in his “Letter from Birmingham Jail” claiming “Shallow understanding from people of good will is more frustrating than absolute misunderstanding from people of ill will. Lukewarm acceptance is much more bewildering than outright rejection”. This was the view King had on white people who supported racial equality but initiated no action pertaining to it. Through previous experiences in my life
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world has over the last century gone through big changes. This does not only concern the changes in technology but also how countries nowadays are able to interact with each other. The new technology have mad it possible to transfer and spread information faster than ever before. These changes have lead to huge possibilities when it comes to researches‚ to do researches that earlier have not been doable. For example when it comes to knowledge about illnesses and health. Earlier people died from deceases
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