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Time Runner: A Narrative Fiction
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It was a hot summer day in River Creek park when Nate, saw his crush and started to think “this is the day, the day I will finally ask Ashley out! Nate leisurely made my way toward Ashley when Nate’s feet started to slow suddenly it looked like he was walking through a lot of mud. Then Ashley turned around to see him walking like that. Nate stopped and said “hey Ashley could you come over here?” She started to walk and with every step she took it made Nate more sweaty. “Ash-Ash-Ashley would you like to g-g-go on a date?” “I would love to” Ashley said. Nate started to blush
Later that week at school, “Hey guys Ashley said yes!” Nate said “Nice” Tyrone said what nate did not notice when he left the class was Amy crying about how Nate was supposed to love her.
That whole week Nate never saw Amy again. “Way to go jerk can’t you take a hint” someone said.
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“It's a long way down” Nate thought and he jumped. As Nate was falling he started to move his arms and legs like a awkward chicken trying to fly all of a sudden Nate saw a flash and the next second he was In the river soaking wet looking up to where the bridge was supposed to be. “What, I must be imagining things” Nate thought. Nate then continued to walk to Tyrone’s house. Nate arrived at Tyrone’s house to see nothing was the same “how is this possible?” Nate thought. Nate turned around to see a newspaper boy handing out newspaper so Nate ran up and grabbed one. When Nate looked at the date a look of disbelief ran across his face. “How is this possible, it must be time travel!, It must have something to do with speed” Nate thought as he started to run suddenly a white flash and Nate was back in his time. “Wait, I can fix things between me and Amy now” Nate thought as relief struck him Mate then ran back in time. “This is the time I fix things between me and Amy” Nate thought, Nate looked at Ashley then Amy “it's worth it” he thought and walked

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