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Out of the many aspects, Anaya’s thesis statement is well crafted. Her thesis statement has an opinion and is focused in an idea. She writes that people with mental illness suffer the most: “At the same time, another group—those with mental illness—has come to suffer even worse representation” (J. Aaron, D. Kennedy, X. Kennedy, and E. Repetto 53). This view point of hers can be argued by another person who might think that people with diseases suffer more than the ones with mental illness. Another major aspect needed in an essay that Anaya has is examples. She inserted examples in her paragraphs to support her ideas, opinions, and topics. For instance, Anaya writes an example about the media on mental illness. She states that the “descriptions of mental illness also go beyond Maria’s concerns, because the media actually exploit it” (54). This example relates back to her main focus in the thesis statement. Rosie Anaya’s essay is an encouragement for me and all other students reading it to improve on the writing skills. It obtains clarity, effectiveness, and is error