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The Underdog: The American Revolution
The American Revolution

The Underdog:
I am home, staying safe and I am so nervous for my husband. I know he can do it, but I am so scared for his army. His army only has 20,000 troops and the British had over 30,000 mercenaries. I was worried sick. Elizabeth cared so hard for the sick, and dead and sometimes served in combat. I knew George was nervous, he didn't have a standing army and the British did. Our army was on a shortage of gunpowder, clothing, and food, I so badly wanted to risk my life to give them what they need, so I can help them win the war. Even though our army was on a shortage it was much quicker for us to get our supplies because we’re close to home. The British supplies would take months to come because they were far from
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He told me that he wanted to attack the Hessians over Christmas because the Hessians would be too busy celebrating and thought we would be celebrating too. I told him it was a good idea but I didn't have much confidence in him. George told me, Elizabeth, and I knew it was a perfect time to attack. It was the Battle of Trenton we were fighting at. We crossed the Delaware River to attack. George told me it was a surprise attack to the Hessians. We won the battle the day after Christmas, December 26. George’s plan succeeded, and I, Elizabeth, was so, very, …show more content…
They went out to Saratoga and gave it they're all. I, Elizabeth Jane, worked so hard at the war as a nurse and a secret soldier. As a nurse, I had to help people with injuries or sickness. And being a secret soldier I had to disguise myself as a boy so I could fight. I had to cut my hair and change my name to a more masculine name. While Elizabeth was fighting at Saratoga and George was leading, I was waiting for the results. They have won the Battle of Saratoga! It was a turning point for George, Elizabeth, and the war because the underdogs have tied up the war, it convinced potential foreign partners, and it renewed the morale of the American public. I am so glad that my husband was a great leader to us, and that he was so good, we were able to tie up the war with fewer people. I, Elizabeth, am so relieved that I participated in this war, and was able to help so that we could tie up the

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