Summary Of Assessment: Rambling, Run-Ons And Fragment
Assessment: Rambling, Run-Ons and Fragment
Correct the Rambling Paragraph:
After, all the fun and laughter had subsided, when most of the colored lights had been turned off, the patio seemed strangely empty. Where once a joyous throng of relatives and friends had danced and clapped and sung, a creepy silence had settled amid the vacant tables and abandoned chairs, had all but hidden the shadowy gazebo, for night had shrouded the backyard and at long last, the party had finally ended.
Correct the Rambling Paragraph:
James had been raised in a series of crappy apartments and aging trailer courts – whatever his grandmother could afford – all of which had three things in common: roaches large enough to wear doll clothes, neighbors addicted
Correct the Rambling Paragraph:
After, all the fun and laughter had subsided, when most of the colored lights had been turned off, the patio seemed strangely empty. Where once a joyous throng of relatives and friends had danced and clapped and sung, a creepy silence had settled amid the vacant tables and abandoned chairs, had all but hidden the shadowy gazebo, for night had shrouded the backyard and at long last, the party had finally ended.
Correct the Rambling Paragraph:
James had been raised in a series of crappy apartments and aging trailer courts – whatever his grandmother could afford – all of which had three things in common: roaches large enough to wear doll clothes, neighbors addicted