Preview

Persuasive Essay: The Story Of Avon's Day

Good Essays
Open Document
Open Document
1605 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
Persuasive Essay: The Story Of Avon's Day
On a cold damp hallows eve three children Avon, Wyatt, and Cynthia stood before a forested wood, each tired from a night of trick or treating, Avon is the first to speak “What’s the haul guys?” he says, “about 10 pounds of pure sugar” Cynthia chimes “wanna scare some kids since we are near the haunted woods” they all look at each other with evil grins that would burn the soul out of any who watched and then burst out with laughter. “Ok lets go.” Cynthia says leading the boys into the forest on a small path. Roughly ten minutes later the children stood in a circle puzzled by the absence of the path they were once on “Hey Cynthia where is the path” Wyatt would say in a shriveled voice “What do you mean it was right th-” Cynthia was cut off due …show more content…
The children stand before a heap of dead bodies clearly all children covered in blood. As Avon whispers with tears of despair We need to leave now this is ungodly” a skull slides off the pile and falls before the children with a clack. On the opposite side of the heap a noise can be heard slowly getting louder “He he he” and louder “He he he” and louder “He he he” until finally it is a screech in the children's ears all they heard was the demented laugh of something, holding their ears Avon tries to pull wyatt away but he knew he couldn’t move “Wyatt, Cynthia please come with me oh god move please”Avon screams terrified, suddenly a sort of cone-shaped piece of hair appears on the other side of the heap “Tee he he” the things body slowly coming up “Tee he he” slowly rising a colorful coat is now visible “Tee hee he” rainbow pants “Tee hee hee” this thing is finally standing in front of them an... a clown with green hair a white face, a purple coat, rainbow pants, and disgusting bloody …show more content…
A crash is heard from behind them before they hear “1..2...Boppos coming for you...3...4…better hide in fear” Boppo would say while laughing maniacally “We need to run” Avon yelled at wyatt whilst a seemingly magical thread of light would wrap around wyatts foot in a split second wyatt was being dragged towards the carnival screaming bloody murder. “WYATT!!!” Avon screamed for his friend Boppo seemed to be unfazed by the trees in his way knocking them down left and right “BING” crash “BONG” crash “BING” crash “BONG”. Avon began to run faster than he had ever ran, faster he thought “Must go faster” crash “Need more speed” crash “Come on legs i know we can do this” avon was now running through the first rides of the carnival “Help please anyone please oh god where is everyone!” Avon screeched, suddenly seeing wyatt hanging from a stage of sorts a puppet stage dancing with wires of light holding him in place alongside a dead officer “Wyatt! Answer me wyatt” Avon screeched as he rushed to the cops corpse realising wyatt was dead and finding a radio hanging from the officers belt screaming into the small device he said “Help is anyone out there?

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    It was a gloomy kind of day in the little town. Adam and Barbara were driving to a little shop to pick up some things. They were a nice, young married couple. A dog was rooming the streets, it didn’t look like he had a home. As Adam and Barbara were driving back home from the little shop they were crossing the bridge over the river when the dog jumped in front of their car. They swerved the car out of the way and ran right into the bridge. Their car was half on the bridge. The dog was the only thing holding the car from falling into the water. The dog ran and the car fell in the water with Adam and Barbara inside of it. They later walked into their house not knowing what had happened. They were dead and couldn’t leave their house and the person who could help them was Beetlejuice. Beetlejuice, a Tim Burton film is full of suspenseful music, dark colors and lighting to create the dark, creepy mood of the entire film.…

    • 510 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    As the sun set on the last bonfire of the year, the kids all gathered around, waiting for Billy Black’s famous campfire stories. The weekend prior Halloween meant his tales would make even the bravest would shiver in fright as they huddled in a tight group, listening attentively as his voice echoed through the night air with only the crackling fire to interrupt him.…

    • 1383 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Good Essays

    At bedtime, Jennie agreed to let Maurice, Martha, Louis, Jenny, and Betty stay up and play with their toys as long as they locked the door and turned out the lights. Later that night, Jennie wakes up to a phone ringing. She gets up and answers the phone. The woman who had called asked for someone Jennie didn't know, laughed, and then hung up. She then looked and saw the doors unlocked and the lights on. She locked the door and turned out the lights, assuming her children had gone to bed. She went back to sleep only to be woken up again by a sound of something hitting the roof and rolling off. She dozed back to sleep. Only thirty minutes later, she woke up to the smell of…

    • 1251 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    Isabelle Black Monologue

    • 1057 Words
    • 5 Pages

    Gather ‘round, gather ‘round children, while I tell you the story of Isabelle Black, the evilest person around. Don’t be scared children, you’re all safe now, but you wouldn’t have been exactly twenty years ago today. On a dark and stormy night, an adorable child named Elle Doucette was walking the streets of New York alone. That poor innocent child didn’t realize that she was about to make a decision that would change her life. As I was saying, as Elle Doucette was walking that night it started to rain, so she ran into the nearest building that she saw. What she didn’t know was that that building was the haunted building where the beautiful young maiden, Isabelle Black was killed ten years ago on that night. Elle was glad that she found a…

    • 1057 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Good Essays

    It’s true that George left Lennie unsupervised and he also killed his best friend; however, George was justified in killing Lennie.…

    • 697 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    The year was 1953. It was a cool, crisp twenty-ninth of October. Usually, after their chores and homework were done, Kathy, 8, and her brother Jonathan, 15, along with their friend May, 11, and her cousin Adam, 13, all went to Joe’s Arcade, the local hangout of Leaport, North Carolina. Instead, they all decided to meet at the end of their dead end street, Farrow Avenue, and go for a walk through the woods. They were all bored since the arcade was too crowded and supper wasn’t ready yet. Their town was a small town, so there wasn’t any other places to go besides the woods. Plus, the old, burned O’Leary house was out there.…

    • 2483 Words
    • 10 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    The Anonymous Minotaur

    • 204 Words
    • 1 Page

    Once upon a time, in the land of Ooo, there was a monster they called The Lich. As he left his cavern he looked down the mountainside to see a group of children from the candy kingdom all out trick or treating. The Lich sent skeleton pirates out to steal their candy. Little would they know they would be taken as well, being that they were themselves made of candy. As the skeletons closed in the kids began to shake, hearing the bushes move and twigs snap. The Lich summoned an undead Minotaur, it growled and roared as it charged after the children, they tried to run but the skeletons had jumped out and cut them off. Frightened by the undead, the candy children trembled a bald eagle came from the sky and snatched them up, taking the children…

    • 204 Words
    • 1 Page
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Presented in the book entitled Catcher in the Rye, Holden Caulfield rebels against what life has to offer. Symbolized throughout the book, Holden shows his many dislikes towards the normal actions of a human being. The normal things that take place in society seem to irate Holden. Stated in chapter two, Holden says “People always think something’s all true.” Holden is explaining his frustration of the lack of education towards things people say and do. Holden tends to see the bigger picture, and the smaller details. Also stated in chapter two of Catcher in the Rye, Holden states “People never notice anything.” This also shows Holden’s great attention to detail. Holden notices the little things; he notices the little girl, later on in the book, that is having…

    • 520 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Virginia Persuasive Essay

    • 579 Words
    • 3 Pages

    We, the delegates of Virginia believe and agree that the number of members of Congress should be proportional to population. We believe this because it is most beneficial for the population to be proportional because a huge state like Virginia should not have the same number of representatives of congress as a smaller state like Delaware or Georgia. The reason why we have such a large population is because we have such a large slave population. Slaves are the people who work in our fields and this act boosts our economy, bringing more people to our state. If the representation was distributed equally among states, then smaller states like Delaware, would have the same number of representatives as a huge state like us. That would not allow a…

    • 579 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    The Turn of the Screw by Henry James is a story that calls for the reader to question the sanity of the main character, the Governess. The Governess is sane but becomes mildly mentally disturbed as she independently experiences hallucinations. She is mostly sane because she is aware of her surroundings, she can make rational decisions and she has had mild hallucinations.…

    • 990 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Good Essays

    Dill is a very imaginative friend of Scout’s. He is always making up imaginative stories and is fascinated with little things. I believe the reason that Dill is so imaginative is because he is modeled after Harper Lee’s real life friend Truman Capote. Truman Capote was also an imaginative person that played a large influence on much of Lee’s life. I believe that he is fascinated with Boo because of his childlike intuition. It also adds excitement to their lives and something to do each day. Since many people only know rumors of Boo, I believe that they would like to find out what the real Boo is like. What Dill brings to Scout and Dill’s life is a sense of adventure. It is a new person for them to play with rather than each other, and his imaginative stories make them want to go out and have adventures of their own. Although Dill often lies and runs away, I believe he is a mainly positive influence. He adds a feeling of excitement to their lives and agrees with Atticus’ beliefs of do not judge a person until you have lived a day in their shoes.…

    • 724 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Out of the many female characters in To Kill A Mockingbird, Calpurnia plays a mother like roll, she has many views about the Tom Robinson case and the Maycomb town, and she has many of he characteristics and opinions shown in the novel. Calpurnia played a major roll in the novel because she was a mother like character, her views about Tom’s case and Maycomb illustrate what it is like where the book takes place, and last but not least her characteristics and behavior.…

    • 745 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    “Scrape, Scrape, Scrape” high pitched screeching sounds fill the tiny cabin. I turn to the other three girls who wore an identical petrified look in their eyes. “Scrape, Scrape, Scrape” penetrates our eardrums, once again adding to the growing panic. I attempt to evaluate the situation as best as my 4th-grade self can. We are in our seemingly “safe” camp cabin full of eight girls and two high school counselors in a separate room. “Scrape, Scrape, Scrape” dread begins piling up in the pit of my stomach. ”It’s the shovel man!” a cabin mate blurts out. I huddle next to the girl quivering beside me, using her radiating body warmth to substitute for the chill in this grave of a room. “Creak” the door inches open.…

    • 885 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Good Essays

    The economy isn't something Trump looks forward to tackling. In a January interview with "Good Morning America," Trump offered up a bleak assessment of the U.S. economy but added that, in terms of fixing it, it's a task he'd rather skip.…

    • 1009 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    The hook should relate to the topic of your essay, but it can take many forms. It can be an anecdote (very short…

    • 1800 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays