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Personal Narrative: The Other Person Who Changed My Work
Dixie: Sherri, your thoughts about the word count are good ones. I think rereading something allowed would help me too. I have found having someone else listen to what I have wrote is a big way of help to me. I think that getting the suggestion from the other person has changed my work a lot. They can pick up on the mistakes that I might not see. Have you had time to check this website
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