Personal Narrative: The Forbidden Forest

It was a warm Friday in Orlando, but the lines were not lengthy at Universal. It was a distant walk to Hogwarts, especially with my mom and grandmother. We rushed to rent a locker which took even longer. Once we got the locker we went straight to the line for the Harry Potter and The Forbidden Journey ride.
The line was not long, so I rushed through the twist and turns yelling “Hurry up! I want to get there this year.” It looked so pretty with details and all. The castle was smaller than I expected, but it felt real. We went through the garden and there you see a ton of cool plants. The plants even seemed real. I felt like I was actually a student at Hogwarts. We walked through a courtyard finally getting to the real line. Once we got in,
Next thing you know you're being harassed by a dragon! It even spat real fire at us! It made my eyes flinch making me wish I had some sunglasses on. We jerked in all these different directions, dodging left and right! Finally we came to an abrupt stop in the deep, dark, Forbidden Forest. Once we were in The Forbidden Forest it was quiet and still for a second, then you hear a dark, scary voice that belonged to Aragog telling you to avoid his brothers, sisters, sons and daughters then the spiders come spitting water and trying to get you! Then I hear Hermione’s voice telling me to follow it, so you do which makes you pop out the forest on to the Quidditch pitch.
At the Quidditch pitch, Harry tells me “Follow me and stay close,” and he leads you straight to the Dementors, so you follow Harry to a wooded area in which it is cold and eerie where a Dementor tried to get my mom and her memories, but out of nowhere I heard “Expecto Patronum!” then a stag comes barreling towards you! Finally, we fly to the castle to see that we had helped Harry win the Quidditch Cup!
There he tells us “Good Job! That was