Personal Narrative: My Last Softball
My Last Softball game
By:Ashlynn Telck Have you ever played fast pitch softball? On June 1, I had a softball game that I had to go to. My mom drove me to the softball field we had an hour of practice before the game started. After that, the game started and i was batting first I was really nervous. Then, I went to the home plate and i hit the ball and i ran as fast as I could to first base all I could here was Mom yelling,“RUN RUN RUN” in the background . I made it to second without getting tagged out. After, one of my teammates batted. We got a point only because I made it home before i got tagged out!!!
My team
CRUSHURS
10
11
17
Their team
ANGRY BIRDS 7
12
13 Then, there team was batting and i had to go to second …show more content…
Well he saw me play once and my brother he never came to my games and it was kinda sad. My first game we won. My first game i was batting and I hit the ball, my mom,yelled RUN RUN RUN. And that was a point. And of course that was coming from my mom. When my mom screamed i got embarrassed. My mom told me the first one was a success it was coach's daughter that hit the ball the last and he still yelled at her because she did not swing the ball right. My mom could hear coach yelling at her and it was all because she swung the bat wrong and and coach did not even say good job and she got us 3 points and all three girls got us 3 points so ya. I asked my mom who and why was coach getting mad at. “kalla that's who” said mom
“Why” I replied
Then the other team played and it was a close one and we 1 thought it was fun my mom told me i cried so many time because then after we got home then we got ice cream and me and my mom went to bed.
The point of view of a baseball bat
When we got there i put the bat in the in the bat holder. PING the ball slammed down on the ground.
I bet my bat could feel it it was not music to my ears it sounded like someone dropped a cinder block on the ground it hurt my
By:Ashlynn Telck Have you ever played fast pitch softball? On June 1, I had a softball game that I had to go to. My mom drove me to the softball field we had an hour of practice before the game started. After that, the game started and i was batting first I was really nervous. Then, I went to the home plate and i hit the ball and i ran as fast as I could to first base all I could here was Mom yelling,“RUN RUN RUN” in the background . I made it to second without getting tagged out. After, one of my teammates batted. We got a point only because I made it home before i got tagged out!!!
My team
CRUSHURS
10
11
17
Their team
ANGRY BIRDS 7
12
13 Then, there team was batting and i had to go to second …show more content…
Well he saw me play once and my brother he never came to my games and it was kinda sad. My first game we won. My first game i was batting and I hit the ball, my mom,yelled RUN RUN RUN. And that was a point. And of course that was coming from my mom. When my mom screamed i got embarrassed. My mom told me the first one was a success it was coach's daughter that hit the ball the last and he still yelled at her because she did not swing the ball right. My mom could hear coach yelling at her and it was all because she swung the bat wrong and and coach did not even say good job and she got us 3 points and all three girls got us 3 points so ya. I asked my mom who and why was coach getting mad at. “kalla that's who” said mom
“Why” I replied
Then the other team played and it was a close one and we 1 thought it was fun my mom told me i cried so many time because then after we got home then we got ice cream and me and my mom went to bed.
The point of view of a baseball bat
When we got there i put the bat in the in the bat holder. PING the ball slammed down on the ground.
I bet my bat could feel it it was not music to my ears it sounded like someone dropped a cinder block on the ground it hurt my