Preview

Personal Narrative

Good Essays
Open Document
Open Document
598 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
Personal Narrative
Early on in my life I learned that life is not easy and that there are bumps in the road that may throw you off track, just like Tess did.
My family moved from Michigan back to Ohio in 2004. At first, things went smoothly and we were figuring things out. But after about 8 months, I wasn’t so naïve. I was walking to school with my older brother, who was in 7th grade at the time, and I was in 2nd grade. He was fruastrated because my parents had a fight. Being the curious 8 year old I was, I asked him, “Why were they fighting?” Troy snapped back at me, “Because we’re poor!” I immediately became confused. How could we be poor? We had food, a home, and clothes. Did poor people have homes, food to eat, and clothes on their back? Troy continued to
…show more content…
That was a speed bump we weren’t expecting. Financial issues aren’t the only things that can be unexpected and difficult. There are emotional speed bumps too.
When my family moved back to Ohio I felt like my world was collapsing in on me. I was 3 years old when we moved to Michigan, so everything that I really knew and remembered was in Michigan. My house, my friends, school, parks… everything. I was seven years old when I was told that everything that I knew was going to change in less than a month. That’s a big change for someone of that age. My first few days at Smith Elementary were rough. I didn’t know anyone and I didn’t know my surroundings. After a year of being at Oakwood I was familiar with the school and town. But I still felt out of place. I made friends but I didn’t make any strong connections with anyone. As the years went on I moved from group to group. Once Junior High started I was lonely. I had tried the cliques, gotten in trouble because of them; and I was still alone. That year was full of nights with tears. When my brother left for college at the end of my 7th grade year I was devastated. He was my best friend. How was I suppose to last without him? Well truth be told, I didn’t. My grades began slipping; I went from being a straight A student to B’s and C’s. Along with that I began lying frequently and getting in trouble. I was lost and confused. Being

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    During this time, my younger brother was born and the downfall of my parent’s relationship began. Home life was difficult, but surrounding myself in books and science projects comforted me and I was happy with myself. I learned that drowning myself in novels and tutoring others was the best cure to feeling upset about either family or friend drama, so I used this to my advantage from seventh to eleventh grade. As a result, I received Academic Awards and was placed on the Honor Roll every year and was extremely proud of this version of myself that I had…

    • 485 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    In chapter 12, the key event to me was when Claudia and Finn talked to each other through the keys. I felt many emotions when reading their interaction one of them being happy. I felt happy when they talked to each other because it was a turning point in the story in my opinion. I also felt surprised because at first, I thought by having two keys, there would be a lock that would need both keys to hear and speak to each other. I also felt confused by the way they conversed; How could they now hear each other but not before. I think by having one key being touched, the other key can hear because on page 153 Claudia says she breathed and rubbed on the key making it warm and on page 154 Finn says when he touches the key it's warm.I like the way the author wrote the scene from both perspectives, it gave us the readers a clearer understanding of how both Finn and Claudia felt. I also like how the author described the way both keys affect each other and have a "key" connection.…

    • 439 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Imagine everything that you know being ripped away from you all in the period of one day. Moving to Utah from Texas was a big change but moving from a house next to your school surrounded by your friends and daily experiencing social media and constant contact to an all girls therapeutic home with no electronics and not knowing anyone. That was a huge change for a sixteen about to be seventeen year old.…

    • 1080 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The thirteenth emoji going left to right, that has heart eyes and has its lips perked out is relateable to a part of the book where Jerome and Rory are kissing intensively. On page 200 it states "I started pressing my lips into his cheek - just a hint of a kiss,.....I felt his shoulders release, and he made a little noise that was partly a groan, partly a sigh. He kissed my neck up, up, up to my ear......My body flushed itself with all the good chemicals that it takes to reserve for making out. On page 201 it states " He told me scary Jack the Ripper facts, and I had the sudden need to make out with him until I ran out of breath. I would have continued indefinitely if........."…

    • 395 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Personal Narrative

    • 936 Words
    • 1 Page

    12 year old would do right after getting home. I would go over to the kitchen and look at the…

    • 936 Words
    • 1 Page
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Personal Narrative

    • 934 Words
    • 4 Pages

    Does moving to a new place change everything you ever experience? Moving to a whole new descriptive place is like being pop out of your mothers belly again. Especially, when you move to a place where the language, the food, the people, school and everything else is brand new. Those type of situations, shape your way of living in a constructive way that will affect the rest of your lifestyle. That's the same situation that made me have a life change into a whole new story. Almost 15 years ago, my mother had to make a decision that will affect her and affect the love ones around her. An option that will make her leave everything she ever loved and wanted behind forever. The option was to leave her lifestyle, her family and leave a part of her own blood made from her flesh. The own blood was me, leaving me with my grandma so she could had gone to find a job and start a new journey. To have a way to support the her baby and her own family. Departing to the U.S.A when I was only one years old. Until a sudden burdens of death that was going to make my whole story, lifestyle, my whole childhood and the rest of my life changed.…

    • 934 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    Growing up in Lincoln Park Chicago, I went to a private school for preschool through 1st grade. Although it was a exceptional school for elementary kids, the education for middle school and high students was not as adequate. On Average, three or four teenagers graduated from the eighth grade class. When I was in 2nd grade, my parents made the decision to move to the suburbs. On June 27th, we all packed into our Honda minivan and drove the 45 minutes out to a new home in the town of Winnetka. Wishing I could bring my friends and my past life with me, I cursed my parents for removing me from my old way of life. I had to leave behind all of my friends and teachers. Within my first year at Crow Island, my new school, I had learned so many new…

    • 1565 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Better Essays

    Personal Narrative

    • 804 Words
    • 4 Pages

    Have you ever been through an experience where you moved to an unfamiliar location by yourself? I had the opportunity to do just that when I left my hometown in Hong Kong and come to America for a better education. I was only thirteen years of age at the time. Giving me the chance to come the U.S was the greatest gift that my parent has ever given me in my life. I appreciated them for providing me this valuable and precious chance for my thirteen years old birthday present.…

    • 804 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Personal Narrative

    • 447 Words
    • 2 Pages

    As I was writing my personal narrative for my composition 1 class, it easily made my mind boggle. After I had got started on my personal narrative, it was easy for me to keep writing and keep following along the story line. The main strength of mine that the essay played to was my creativity and my flexibility for different writings, because I have never written an essay as serious and sad as this one, but I did have to add my happy ending when I finished the story. I wanted it to be very attention grabbing with a twist, but I also wanted it to be very emotional.…

    • 447 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Personal Narrative

    • 1023 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Growing up in Kokomo, Indiana there wasn’t much to the daily life in my hometown. I’d like to believe this is me telling the story of how through hard work and perseverance I could achieve my goal in high school. A goal that many told me was unachievable and stupid to pursue. What is this goal you wonder? My goal was to play Basketball at Kokomo High School.…

    • 1023 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    After retaking the LASSI I have noticed a considerable amount of improvement as well as regression. In the beginning of the year, I vowed to myself that I would become a better student. I wanted to maximize all of my abilities in order to be successful. So, after I took my first LASSI and had my talk with Mac, I began to implement new strategies meant to help me accomplish my goal. First I had to deal with my anxiety. In past years I suffered with a lot of anxiety while learning math. I used to love math very much, however, this changed after my 6th grade year. Math became a foreign subject to me. I could no longer make connections and solve problems. As a result, my grades in math began to drop. As a person who is used to getting A’s and B’s on assignments, I had a difficult time in coping with my failure since it didn’t live up to my standards in the subject of math. My difficulty with math eventually caused me to have anxiety. I had carried this anxiety until my sophomore year in high school. It seemed as if no matter how hard I tried to concentrate on math tests my mind would always become blank. Luckily I had an…

    • 472 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Adversity Changed My Life

    • 830 Words
    • 4 Pages

    As we grow up we all go through some kind of adversity that can lead to something good or even something worse in the end. While I was growing up, I experienced a huge change that I thought would make my life terrible, well at least I to me it did. I had to move from living with my father to moving in with my mother. This change affected me emotionally, but also changed my life for the better. I wouldn’t be who I am today if it wasn’t for this change in my life.…

    • 830 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    or for the month. He doesn’t have long time goals. I can say that I hate that and that is not the way to live. So, I feel like my mother decision was good, I am sure we are both disappointed that he is not the man that we both know that he could be.…

    • 977 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    It wasn’t necessarily a big move since we still lived in Idaho, but it meant I had to change schools. It was difficult for me to do that since the old school I had been attending since kindergarten. Moving meant that I would have to leave my 4th grade class in Boise, to join a new one in Meridian. I was excited since it meant I was moving into a new house that was located in a neighborhood that was brand new. The feeling of being somewhere new was weird at first, since it didn’t smell or look like home. We had to unpack all of our things and set up the tv and internet. The typical stuff people do when they first move in. Going to bed in a new room, new house was super strange for me. I felt like I belonged at my old place. Falling asleep on the first night didn’t happen too easy. When I woke up the next day, I had to get ready to go to school. It was my last day there, and I knew I had to make…

    • 1001 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Good Essays

    Laws of Life Essay

    • 619 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Since young, my parents would give me occasional yet hard-hitting talks about how I should never brood on impending setbacks or getting far in life will become a faraway dream. Their words have been etched into my mind ever since, but I never actually had the chance to experience major challenges in my life first-hand. So, a recent turn of events allowed me to realize for myself that although most things in life usually fall into place as nicely as you want them to, there will always be occurrences where a particular situation happens, completely uncalled for, and you have to try your best not to lose your mind over it - all you can do is to push yourself forward.…

    • 619 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays