Peeking In Line 17

In line 2 Blanco uses the word ‘peeking’ to describe the sun rising in the morning. I would change this word to the word ‘peering’ just to make it seem a little more overpowering. Blanco uses the word ‘teeming’ in line 12 to describe the silver trucks carrying oil, paper, or milk. I would change this word to ‘brimming’ so it sound like it’s overflowing the brim of the highway. The word ‘blackboard’ in line 17 is used when Blanco is talking about the lessons for the day. ‘Whiteboard’ is the word I would change blackboard to just to make it a little more modern. ‘Rooting’ in line 27 in used to describe the ground rooting us. I would change this word to embedding so that it sounds like its really effecting us deeply. And lastly, in line 29 the