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Justin Kevin Cunha Dr. McB
ENG 101
28 September 2012

Writer’s Checklist for Writing a Narrative 1. Are my title and introduction enticing?
Yes, my title and introduction are both catchy and have good opening visuals.

2. Is my thesis effective?
Yes, my thesis is effective and has question followed by answer.
3. Have I included enough details so the reader can visualize my experience? Yes, there is details so the reader can visualize my experience with series of events.
4. Are the events presented in a logical sequence?
Yes, events are presented from step to step.

5. Have I used transitions to help the sequence of events flow smoothly? Yes, the essay has series of events that transition smoothly.

6. Have I used dialogue (if appropriate)?
N/A

7. Have I used a consistent point of view and verb tense? Yes, the essay has a point of view from the points of view and has well sited words.

8. Is the point of my narrative evident?
Yes, the point of the narrative is the story being told in the third person.

9. Have I ended the story satisfactorily?
Yes, The story has a very well written conclusion.

10. Have I proofread thoroughly?
Yes, I have proofread thoroughly and made sure spelling and sentences are complete.
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Justin Kevin Cunha Dr. McB
ENG 101
28 September 2012
Military Minds Military is a subject that have a lot of politics in it besides just soldiers who fight for their countries. Military is always on the go or move for the country of the United States. The technology that the United States has is greatly increased over the last decades whether its submarines, airplanes, or special warfare training. The military is what keeps a country safe and keeps a country standing to continue to be that country and thrive among citizens. There are all types of different branches in the United States army such as Army, Navy, Marines, Air Force, Army National Guard, as well as reserves for every branch of service. The military is ready to deploy at any time to quick disasters as well as if there was a chance a war would break out. The United States military is one of the most highly recognized military in todays world. The United States military plays a key role with allies as well as giving aid to those in need of assistance. The military is one of the best things to experience. Why would anyone want to join the military and risk their lives? Many people join the United States military to be a part of something great. Since I was a little kid I enjoyed watching military movies and How the military was full of courage and gave a sense of bravery. As I grew up I found myself thinking and wondering if I would qualify and wanted to seek information about what it takes to be a part of Something so great for this nation. I was at the age of 15 when my older brother had joined the United States Army and had left for basic training. I kept in contact while he was away at basic training Always sending letters with questions about how the experience is and how it felt being a part of Something so great. He had sent the letters back and I could feel the excitement I felt when I had Received the letters back with the information. I can still do this day remember the first time I had...
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