The plot easily engages and maintains the interest of the audience. The goal is clear and the stakes are both high and personal. It’s not just about going to jail; it’s also about destroying a family or strengthening a family.
The story also offers a small ensemble cast and each one of the characters feels very distinct and complex. There’s an identified central character in Rachel.
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Or perhaps open with the parents and the mysterious ride and seeing Harry throw something away. Even provide a visual of something with blood on it.
There’s a strong inciting event with the reveal of the body and the challenge to help Harry get rid of the body. This poses compelling moral decisions and it’s this dilemma that drives act two.
It’s very engaging to watch as the characters struggle with their decision whether or not to help their father. Like Rachel, one senses that there’s more to the story and this creates nice anticipation and suspense.
There’s an interesting turn of events when Michael shows up and wholeheartedly supports dumping the body. The dumping of the body also provides for good tension and a solid midpoint.
The confession by the mother about her affair and the shooting is a strong pivotal plot beat, although it should be noted that the audience probably already suspects that affair. It’s challenging to be able to make this a really compelling twist. However, that’s