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Mt. Everest-Personal Narrative
I awoke to the throbbing pain in my side, but I was glad because I was a man. The throbbing pain in my side annulled out the further pains in my body. I had fractured my ribs on the way back from the forest beneath Mt Everest, I had tumbled down a rocky slope and fractured my ribs. The pain kept me going through the forest.

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