Elliot grappling with his sexuality, so therefore trying, but failing to keep a masculine personality as a disguise. A little background of Hemingway is that word choice was always a key component in making sure what he is trying to say comes through. Hemingway “believed that in order to create realistic dialogue he had to use the words that real people used” (Trogdon 8). This mentality however got him into trouble many times, especially when it came to using sexual and what was considered unconventional language. For instance, a publisher “asked that he remove the phrase "tried to have a baby" and its variations from the 1925 publication of "Mr. and Mrs. Elliot" in In Our Time” (Trogdon 8). In a response to criticism like that Hemingway stated, “I could not avoid using them and still give anything like a complete feeling of what I was trying to convey to the reader” (Trogdon 9). Meaning avoiding these specific words would not allow him to exemplify exactly what he
Elliot grappling with his sexuality, so therefore trying, but failing to keep a masculine personality as a disguise. A little background of Hemingway is that word choice was always a key component in making sure what he is trying to say comes through. Hemingway “believed that in order to create realistic dialogue he had to use the words that real people used” (Trogdon 8). This mentality however got him into trouble many times, especially when it came to using sexual and what was considered unconventional language. For instance, a publisher “asked that he remove the phrase "tried to have a baby" and its variations from the 1925 publication of "Mr. and Mrs. Elliot" in In Our Time” (Trogdon 8). In a response to criticism like that Hemingway stated, “I could not avoid using them and still give anything like a complete feeling of what I was trying to convey to the reader” (Trogdon 9). Meaning avoiding these specific words would not allow him to exemplify exactly what he