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The thesis statement is supposed to answer the question - you state that Romeo is impulsive, but you don't give any evidence towards that statement. Allude to the examples you use in the body.

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"Romeo shows impulsiveness in several instances in Romeo and Juliet, proving that his impulsiveness is a very large part of him as a character, for example when he sees Juliet for the first time at the Capulet party.'

This is grammatically incorrect. Try ".. is a very large part of him as a character. An example of this is when.." or even better "This is exemplified when.."

Noticed a typo that Word may not catch! BY Juliet's beauty.

"Also" works as a sentence transition, but it sounds a little stilted. Try "When Romeo jumps the Capulet's fence, as well, ..."

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