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“This world we live in” Honestly this book feel flat on it’s face.It had a very poor style, and had reppeditive word choice .Even though this book wasn’t my favorite there are deffinitly was that it could be improved. For example the word choice was really repetitive over, and over again the book kept talking about how they need food. Also how they do not have enough food or supplies to feed, and care for the people living in the house. Another example of how this book had poor wording is when they keep saying they need to go Knoxville, and when they get to Knoxville the author keep saying how they were slips , and that is how they got in. A third example of how this book had poor style was when the author kept talking about how everyone misses
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