Thank you for your feed back, I would check again for grammar and editing, I believe there have been some erros. Regarding to share my paper with your educators, I really do not know; what would you suggest Dr. Privitera. This is a topic that I have considered for my Capstone project. I am somehow affraid that someone else copy the study if there is good potential on it. However, I would strongly consider Dr. Privitera's advise.…
Even though using long words, complex sentences, or metaphors could make the writing better for some audience. However, a large number of audience would prefer a simple or graphical writing which would help them to understand complex ideas in shorter time.…
Spigelman and Grobman’s, Why We Chose Rhetoric: Necessity, Ethics, and the (Re)Making of a Professional Writing Program, is a literary analysis using rhetorical strategies to provide support for why communication skills require a strong foundation in liberal arts. In this piece the authors discuss importance of critical insight and reflection, how they go about teaching ethics and, the significance of discourse in developing communication skills.…
The article “Tarmageddon”, written by Andrew Nikiforuk, elaborates about the negative effects of the tar sands on Canada. In his essay, Nikiforuk mainly makes use of the logos appeal repeatedly to get his point across to the reader. The author also makes use of the other two rhetorical appeals to get to the reader. While the author uses logos in the essay to appeal to the audience, he missuses it as he uses it to appeal to the reader’s emotions rather than using it to make a logical argument. This is shown through his word choices and name calling through the essay.…
Cobb, started in 1916, is one of the oldest pedigree broiler breeding company in the world. Family, integrity, being the best and innovation is the core value for Cobb, and contributes it into the leading positions of broiler breeding industry. Currently, Cobb operates as a subsidiary of Tyson Foods. Over the last few decaeds, Cobb had contribute to fight with the world hunger. Today, Cobb comes to the aggieland and recruit new members for the big family. They want to recruit students with strong sense of responsibility and professional communication skills. Students from poultry science major, animal science major or with related background are…
CD3: Peer Review for Aaron M. This was a good speech to pick for a rhetorical analysis because you seem to enjoy the content, which makes it easier to write about, and it has clear elements to analyze (like ethos, pathos, and logos). Your essay discusses both the rhetorical situation and the rhetorical triangle well without going on tangents or including unnecessary information. Your introduction and body paragraphs focus on rhetorical analysis but the conclusion seems to stray. Your conclusion should focus more on if Kennedy’s argument was strong and effective rather than your opinion of the speech.…
I think that this relates to the rhetorical strategy Logos because it talks about how you know whats coming next and whats going to happen next.…
Fantastic points this week! Eva, you posted Clark and Krentz pitfalls to strategic planning which are useful tips to consider. It sounds like you had a great learning experience from the retreat you attended and I definitely believe "mingling" with senior management is a must. Mary Kathryn, your thoughts about having a positive attitude is key to being successful personally as well as professionally. The nurse administrator you worked with gave you some insightful wisdom. In fact, according to Tim Maloney with the Newport Group, states that one of the barriers to strategic planning can be negativity, which can hamper an organization's vision. He states that "cynicism" is " the hardest obstacle to overcome in the strategic thinking and…
At this point in time it seems as if though the majority of Millennials, myself included, have mastered the art of digital conversation. “I Had A Nice Time With You Tonight. On The App.”, an editorial written by Jenna Wortham, the author delves into the vast number of social media outlets we’ve grown accustomed to having at our exposal and convenient it is for so many opportunities to communicate lie in the palm of your hand. Although social media and the internet can get out of whack sometimes, I certainly agree with what Wortham has to say about it.…
The two editorials presented speak about universal healthcare in the United States but, the editorial speaking against universal healthcare is the more affective of the two because it uses two forms of rhetorical appeals and three forms of the argumentations. The first editorial mainly uses emotion to appeal to the reader while the second appeals more to statistics and logic. Also, the second editorial is more objective rather than subjective because of how the writer speaks and what he or she chooses to say. Editorial number one, while very well written, is not a strong argument to use. The editorial uses only and appeal to emotions rather than ethics or logic.…
Good morning, this is Shelby Swalec and I wanted to apologize for my behavior last week. Between my health issues and expectations from school, I was not thinking clearly about my decision to attend lecture before meeting with you. I'm sorry for talking to Ed, Pam, and Gail before contacting you, I didn't mean to get the wonderful nursing professors involved in my issues. I realize that this program interruption is the best thing for me to get back on track.…
Throughout the rhetorical analysis writing process, I learned different techniques on how to better understand the message being conveyed. This activity allowed me to better understand Critical Thinking, and now I can make more clear and reasonable judgments on a topic. I also learned Critical Reading, which allows me to not only recognize what is being said, but how the topic is being presented. But even with that being understood, I still hit some brick walls while writing, but I slowly overcame and learned from those obstacles. The part I found to be the most difficult about the analysis of the speech was, figuring out which parts where logos, ethos, and pathos.…
I am quite excited to further pursue DOCC's goal of open dialogue once on campus. Nurturing a viewpoint-tolerant environment gives me hope for the future, wherein I hope that both mine and my fellow peers' viewpoints are questioned. While many college students are left-leaning, I firmly believe that all students should feel free to share their opinions.…
On June 12, 2016 in Orlando, Florida, a terrorist attack took place at the Pulse Nightclub which claimed the lives of 49 Americans and injured 53 others. The incident is considered one of the deadliest mass shootings in the United States. Following the event, President Obama and GOP presidential nominee Trump gave speeches regarding the event. When presented with President Obama’s speech and candidate Trump’s speeches concerning the shooting, the audience is presented with two examples of how rhetoric can be used to persuade and achieve opposing goals. By examining the elements of rhetoric and how they are applied in these speeches, the viewer is shown how Aristotle’s teachings are still being applied over 2000 years later.…
Every day we converse with friends, family members, and professionals in distinctly differently manners, especially when we are trying to persuade them of something. Through experience, I have learned which rhetorical strategies are most successful and integrated them into a fictional attempt to obtain $500 for textbooks from three people after depleting my funds. I varied the degree of formality in my register and tone, incorporated emotional appeal, and altered my level of transparency and the extent of my honesty toward each person to accomplish this task.…