essay for argumentative

General statement

According to fact,all children need and love their mothers.

Thesis statement
Mother are better parent and guardian from fathers because the nature of mothers are graceful.
Topic sentence 1
Firstly, fathers are usually more accommodating expenses than mothers.

Supporting detail : Mother always is the first person over the world who hopes good thing happen with her children.

Supporting detail : Mother usually make sure that her children feel comfortable enough to talk to her whenever they want.

Supporting detail: fathers often do not have time at home.

Topic sentence 2
Other than that ,do mother make better parent and guardian nature.

Supporting detail: mother nature are graceful

Supporting detail : mother to know when her child need her

Supporting detail : mother have responsible attitude in parent and guardian child.

Topic sentence 3
Beside that,most mothers have a matchless bond with their children.

Supporting detail : mothers pregnant for nine months.

Supporting detail : mother and child to build up a special relationship.

Supporting detail : Mothers is able to analyze the child’s action.

Rebuttal
Despite that,some people might argue that fathers spend much time to play with his children because fathers are better at playing than mothers

Counterargument
It is true that fathers spend much time to play with his children,nevertheless mothers responsibility is providing healthy and good meals for her husband and children.

Conclusion
In conclusion, mothers are better parent and guardian from fathers,because they are fathers are usually more accommodating than mothers, do mother make better parents and guardian, most mothers have matchless bond with their children.

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ADVANCE ENGLISH 1

OUTLINE TOPIC:MOTHERS ARE BETTER

PARENTS AND GUARDIAN FROM FATHERS.

NAME:AMIRUL MUKMININ BIN ABDUL HALIM

MATRIC:DBA 111080

SECTION:10

LECTURER NAME:SIR ASYRAF B. JAMALUDDIN

DATE SUBMITTED: