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Creative Writing: Ms. Debose
“What do you mean by that,” I complained.
“You read with no emotion, your posture was horrible, it was hard for me to look at your face expressions and your voice was annoying. Would you like me to continue?”
“I feel like you’re trying to call me ugly,’ I said with a disappointed face.
“Not so much you but your personality.”
“So you think I’m cute? Cause I think you’re cute,” I responded with a sly look.
Although she tried to hide her blushing, smiling face I could tell she was happy I said that. Knowing her for so long gave me that ability. See Ms. Debose is someone you would call a stoic egoist. On the outside it doesn’t look like she cares what others think about her but inside I bet it eats away at her. However, it also gives her motivation
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“Woah now, that came out your mouth not mine.”
“No sir. What you just describe was a cold-hearted bitch,” she said teary eyed. “You don’t know how hard it is Michael being me. I have no man, no kids and I’m the only one out of my group of friends that hasn’t been married. So I don’t need some jerk or a dumbass stupid high schooler to tell me something I already know.”
That jerk she referring to was her last boyfriend. He broke up with her stating that she was too crazy and stalker like to be in a relationship with. He felt she never trusted him and expected him to cheat on her. It was over in a month.
“I’m a bitch and I’m not afraid to say it,” breaking down in tears.
This is the Dee Dee that I like. The one that isn’t afraid to say what’s in her heart instead of trying to think up something that would be acceptable against everyone
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First,” she started lifting up one finger, “the work won’t be a problem because you’re smart. Matter of fact academic wise you are undoubtedly the smartest person in your class. You don’t do homework, sleep in class, and barely pay attention. Yet somehow, some way you’re still top ranked top five out of every senior in the school. Second, you don’t go to parties because for some odd reason it seems like you try to separate yourself from people. Third and most importantly you don’t flirt or compliment another female the way you do with me,

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