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Benjamin Banneker's Struggle For Independence
Benjamin Banneker, was a son to a former slave, he writes to Thomas Jefferson to convict the institution of slavery in the United States. Banneker tries to persuade Jefferson to reconsider his tolerance of such a heartless system. By using language and referring to history and the Bible, Banneker adopts a respectful yet serious tone in order to move Jefferson’s integrity. In his introductory statement, Banneker humbly retells the powerful story of America’s struggle for independence. He expresses his deference by referring to Jefferson as “sir” and carefully selects words with negative implications in order to take the outrage as well as the hopelessness that overwhelmed the United States during its conflict with Britain. However, he does not

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