Bccom 230: Evaluating Business Communication
Evaluating Business Communication
Michelle Muske
BCOM/230
June 14, 2010
Dr. Doug Gilbert
Upon reviewing the team “A” assignment on “Evaluating Business Communication” the
intended message could have been conveyed better. All of the communiqué had good intentions on
targeting the specific groups they were asked or volunteered to do. The communication in from Beth to
peer was finished nicely and was at the appropriate level. The other three could have used some
improvements to reach the appropriate level for the intended audience. The different leadership styles
did not seem to be followed according to the scenario presented. For instance, the one that I wrote
could have been improved
Michelle Muske
BCOM/230
June 14, 2010
Dr. Doug Gilbert
Upon reviewing the team “A” assignment on “Evaluating Business Communication” the
intended message could have been conveyed better. All of the communiqué had good intentions on
targeting the specific groups they were asked or volunteered to do. The communication in from Beth to
peer was finished nicely and was at the appropriate level. The other three could have used some
improvements to reach the appropriate level for the intended audience. The different leadership styles
did not seem to be followed according to the scenario presented. For instance, the one that I wrote
could have been improved