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“Aspin!” Aspin heard her name being called. She could distinctly hear who was calling her. “Ugh, Raven! Mother said I could explore today!” Aspin shouted at her twin sister. Raven and Aspin were twins, but they looked nothing alike.
Aspin had long, silky hair that went below her back and she was tanned from the summer sun, with bright green eyes.
Raven on the other hand, had pale skin, ice blue eyes, long, thick, and raven colored hair, hence her name. “I know, but
Mother has always said that we shouldn’t go in the woods!” Raven shouted back to her sister. “Aspin?” Raven could feel her heart start to thump uncontrollably out of her chest and her mind filled with fear.
All of a sudden something behind her moved. She turned around with a start.
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“Raven?” she heard a voice in the doorway and turned to see who it was. Aspin rubbed her eyes and looked sleepily at Raven. “Why are you up so early? And why-” she broke off and a shocked expression broke out onto her face. “Aspin? Are you ok? Aspin!” Raven hurried over to her sister, panicked. Aspin shook her head and looked at Raven with a bewildered expression on her face. “You cut off in mid sentence! Are you ok?” Raven anxiously waited for Aspin to answer. Aspin looked at Raven and then she saw Bubbles. She moved her hands to put them on her head. “It’s so weird...” she murmured, “I feel like I had a dream, but it was so... strange. It almost felt like it really happened even though I’m still here.” Raven took Aspin by the hand and brought her over to the couch to sit down. “What was your, dream, about?”
Raven asked. “Well, it’s probably going to sound weird.” Aspin looked over at Raven bashfully. Raven smiled

encouragingly at her. “Honestly, I don’t even know where to begin, so how about I show you instead?” Aspin put her fingers on both sides of Raven head and before Raven could protest, she was plunged into a dream-like vision. What Raven saw sent a feeling of dread rise up in her chest. She saw Aspin dancing next to

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