A Compare And Contrast Malcolm's Pros And Cons

From best to worst Jayne's the best then, Malcolm's second, Simon’s the third and then the worst would be Wash’s. The pros of Simon, Jayne and Malcolm are they all have made interesting topic sentences that grab the reader's attention and clear up what the essay is about. From their topic sentences Simon’s essay was about celebrities having an influence on girls lives. Jayne’s essay is on getting revenge in a good way through music that makes you feel tough without harming someone else. And Malcolm’s is about artists whose style separates them from other artists. Other pros are they all use evidence to back up their arguments and then they explained ‘why?’ it is a good reference. They also make their point clear through the whole essay. The