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 You are in the selection committee for the special teacher award in conjuction with the teacher Day Celebration . which teacher should be give the award ?

Candidate A : the teacher who produce the best academic result (Akirah) Candidate B : the most creative teacher ( Azliza )
Candidate C : the most caring teacher ( Iena)
Candidate D : the teacher who has served the longest in the school (Liza)


    Good morning to the examiners and my fellow friends. I think the teacher who should be given the award on the Teachers’ Day celebration is the teacher who produces the best academic result .This is because the teacher can create good performance in school.

     Firstly ,the teacher has organized many programs to increase the examination  in school .For  example ,the teacher makes program  exploration ,starting from 2.45pm until 4.30pm.Besides that ,the teacher can do the program like answering techniques for each subject during school holidays or Saturday and even at night .It can increase the result in school.       Secondly ,the teacher also helps to attract student to study .For example, teacher makes extra classes without taking any payment ,then the students will study smart and hard and this can increase the school rank in the state.     Lastly the teacher will not stop to increase the performance of the students .The teacher also can contributes ideas to increase the quality of the school .For example ,the teacher will give student a lot of exercises ,make extra class and tuition continuously even until the exam is around the corner.    In conclusion ,I think the best teacher should be given the award is the teacher who produces the best academic result. 


     The teacher who should be given the award in the teachers’ day celebration is the most creative teachers. Creative teachers can make students enjoy in their studies and learning process more happening.       My first point is, teachers always create the new situation for their classes. For example, they do not only use the same classroom for their teaching period, but they try to find the other comfortable places such as the open space to do their teaching activities. The impact is that student not si stress full in that class.     My second point is, creative teachers always use the relaxing teaching activities such as learning by doing the quiz. The information can be created and delivered when students try to fulfill the quiz questions. The activities can make all the students give their opinion and the learning process can be more interesting.     Last but not least, the creative teacher will always find the way to make sure that students can get more information and knowledge with their creative notes. Creative notes can make students understand the subject they learn better.     The conclusion is, students can be make creative and smart in their study field because of all the activities. The impact is that their study result can be more excellent. That is why the award must be given to the creative teachers.


     A very good morning I bid to one and all. I have to a form committee for the teachers’ day celebration. The special teacher award on the teachers day is the the most caring teachers’. We need teachers who care to improve students' personality     The first reason give the award to a caring teacher on the teachers day is because students can share their problem with these teachers. I think this is important because, these teacher have been helping problems faced by students, for example in term of emotion, health and education.      The second reason is, the teacher can give attention to students. This is because many students will seek him or her to improve their learning because they are cormfortable to see the teacher. Most students would feel himself appreciated by the teacher and in return students will show respect for their teachers. As a result they will strive to get good marks in exam.     Lastly, caring teachers concerned to produce good students. For example , in terms of  self- discipline . A good relationship between teachers with students can facilitate learning. Teachers also can be role model to their students.      To conclude, i think that the best award should go to caring teachers because these teacher have to be appreciated. Thank you


      I would like to wish everyone here a very good morning. As we all know the special teacher awars will be given to one of the teachers in commemoration the teachers’ day celebration. Therefore, I have decided to give the award to the teacher who has served the longest in the school.      First and foremost, the teacher who has served the longest  in the school has much experience. The teacher can share his experience with the new teachers and students. For instance, the teachers can explain about the history of his school  to the new teachers and they can learn a actual situation of the school from the senior teacher. So the new teachers will be interested to teach at this school soon. Furthermore, the teacher who has served the longest in the school can also give some advice to the new teachers how to handle student’s cases based on the students background.      The next reason. is the teacher has a lot of knowledge in many areas or in studies. It because, the teachers who has served the longest in the school know more about his students behavior and he know how to solve their problem. He also has many ideas to teach the students and new teachers can learn the new techniques.     In a nutshell, giving the award to the teacher who has served the longest in the school is good idea. This is because, the teacher have much experience and is knowledge end he can also share it with new teachers. Thank you for listening to my opinion.

Candidates C: Good morning everyone, we are here to discus for the teacher award in conjunction with the teachers day celebration.Candidates A would you like to share your opinion with us?                                                                                       Candidates A: Yes, I would thank you. I strongly believe that who should be given the award on the teachers  day celebration is the teacher who produces the best academic result. Why do I say so , the teacher has organized many program, for example, smart exploration  program, answering technique  and so on. Do you agree with me candidates D? Candidates D:  I am sorry, candidate A,I  don’t agree with you poin. I do not think that the award should be given to the teacher who produced the best academic result on teachers’ day .in my opinion, I would  say that the teacher would has served the longest in the school should be given the award . this is because, the teacher has much experience and this teacher can share his experience with new teachers. Candidates B: Excuse me candidate D may I interrupt?

Candidates D: Yes, please go ahead.
Candidates B: Thank you candidate D, I see your point, but I have the new point. I think the caring teachers should be given the award. I say that because, the teachers can approachable easily. So the students can share their problem with this teacher. What do you think candidate C? Candidates C: Yes, I agree with your point, because       the caring teacher can give attention to all student. So the student will seek and improve their learning because they are comfortable with the teachers.  Candidate A: I do not agree with you.i think yhe caring teacher are not suitable. This is because the students will depend full from the teacher. So, the best point is the teacher who produces the best academic result should be given the award. Do you agree with me candidate D? Candidates D: Yes I agree with you. Well, now that we have presented all our viewpoint. What do you have to say candidates B. Candidates C: I support the opinion of candidate A that the award should be given the teacher to best academics result. Candidate A: So, we all agree that the award should be given the teacher who produces the best academic result. Thank you.

Day 1, Session 1 Year End 2011 (not exact words)
People who give the most meaningful contribution to society
a)garbage collectors
b)toilet cleaners
c)road sweepers

Candidate A:

Good morning to the examinerS and my fellow candidateS. There are many people in this world who contribute meaningfully to society. Some sit in high positions while those who do menial tasks are no less worthy. Likewise, garbage collectors have a significant contribution to our society as not many would voluntarily do this 'stinky' but necessary job. First and foremost, I think garbage collectors deserve merit because they are the ones who maintain the cleanliness of our neighbourhood. This is because, without them, there would be rubbish strewn around everywhere which is a sight for sore eyes. Moreover, the stench itself would cause unease among citizens who need to go about their daily business. For example, rotten food, soiled diapers and so on would be an unbearable sight if not collected and disposed of properly. Secondly, garbage collectors should be held in high esteem as their job of maintaining the hygiene of society is a crucial one. This means that without them, diseases would spread rampantly. In addition, the overall health of society would suffer as garbage that is uncollected is an excellent breeding ground for bacteria and insects. For instance, piles of uncollected rubbish is the perfect place for dengue and malaria carrying mosquitos and many more. Last but not least, a garbage collector's job is very meaningful to society because in this modern era, humans have managed to produce so much rubbish per day that without them, the sheer amount would drown the whole city in a week! Imagine how much plastic packaging each of us throws away within a day. Take for example all the empty plastic bottles, Maggi mee wrappers, plastic packaging from the supermarket and even paper products like cigarette boxes and newspapers among others. In short, society would be seriously crippled if garbage collectors did not do their job. Therefore, I truly believe that garbage collectors provide a very meaningful contribution to today's society. Thank you.

So what do you think about this sample? What makes it a high band response?

Now it's your turn, you can try to write your sample script for Candidate B, C or D below and I'll tell you what band you may get. Happy speaking! :P

Cadidate C
Good morning to examiners and my fellow candidates. I can ensure there are many different levels of human such as those live a high quality life and those live in low quality life. But, now's society are not interest in serving for citizens. Road sweeper, who play a crucial role in keeping road cleanly. Anyone here desire to serve for social members today? There are small number of social members who willing to do it so. Road sweeper contribute a lot of mental and physical in serving citizens. If the road is not being cleaned up, what will happen to the next? I think the index of car accident of our country will grow up by this way. Take for example, that will cause a series of road accident when the road be covered by a layer of oil. Furthermore, that will expose social members in an unhygienic environment even expose citizens in suffering diseases such as diarrhea and vomiting. In order to prevent the incident occurred, road sweeper play an important role to prevent social member exposed in an unhygienic condition even prevent from suffering diseases. Last but not least, beautiful environment can lead us live in a comfortable and an enjoyable environment. We will obtain the fresh air. Instead, road are not be cleaned up will destroy the beautiful and fantastic world. The fresh are will be turned to stinky air. That is the incident we cannot accept. They are playing their role to rise up the quality of life. I truly believe that road sweeper give the most meaningful contribution to society

Good morning to the examiners and all candidates. Human should be treating each other’s respectively immaterial types of jobs they contribute to society. Among the entire services field that’s provided, I would like to say that toilet cleaners are the most contribution to society. First and foremost, toilet cleaners are the people who keep cleaning the toilets or gens clean and good looking after everyone usage. To ensure the toilets condition clean and available to be using all the time, toilet cleansers bound to act in full commitment and responsible to carry out their task. Besides that, sometimes this category of workers is also facing some problems on people looking down on them. Thus, it is their must to stay calm and patient to fulfill their task. Indirectly, the contribution also comes to society in sense of toilet cleansers showing him or her personal moral value on the dairy roles that’s being learned and respectful by the society itself. Secondly, a person who works as toilet cleaner is less salary even though they work hard. Their contributions are unlimited however the salaries are fixed. Furthermore, we can’t make sure the number of times they need to perform their cleaning per day. Thus, their contribution is so unforeseeable. Moreover, no matter how’s good the facilities on toilets provided, it is useless if without a toilet cleaner to perform the cleaning job. As to say, people, visitors or customers will feel reluctant visiting a venue that’s dirty and stinky and will causing lose of popularities and revenue. Thirdly, toilet cleansers are those who work hard in behind without notice of others to benefit many aspects. For example, toilet cleansers also keep good image of a company, organization or corporation when the time people visiting their building. Thus, toilet nowadays also becomes part of crucial element within the hospitality management field. With or without our notice, toilets always provided all the tools that necessary for us to use. It is also the responsible of toilet cleaners to ensure the completely set of toilets materials to be provide. By the way, toilet cleaners in society nowadays also have to clean other areas if the toilets are clean. Thus, their jobs would be variable differently based on the circumstances and situation. In a nut shell, society will run out of comfortable if no one willingly to act as toilet cleaners. Therefore, I strongly believe that’s contributions from toilet cleaners is undeniable highest integrity and most valuable moral value in their roles

Each 2-min presentation should include 5 important elements: 1.       Greetings
2.       Repeat situation from the question
3.       State the point given to you
4.       3 pts with relevant explanation & examples
5.       Conclusion
1.       Good morning to everyone.
2.       Good morning I bid to one and all.
3.       Good morning to the examinerS and all candidateS. 4.       A very good morning I wish to all examinerS and fellow candidateS Repeat Situation
1.       Today we are talking about…
2.       The situation I have been given is…
3.       According to the situation…
4.       Based on the situation given…
State the point given
1.       I would like to give 3 reasons for my point which is… 2.       There are 3 reasons to support my point which is… 3.       My point is ________ so to elaborate I would like to discuss 3 reasons. 4.       I think that ____________ is the best idea.

3 Pts (Explanation & Examples)
1.       Firstly, I think that…This is because.. Moreover,... For example,… 2.       Secondly, another reason is… In addition,… For instance,… 3.       Finally, in my opinion…Furthermore,… A good example is... Conclusion

1.       In conclusion, this is the best point because… 2.       To conclude, I still agree that…
3.       In a nutshell, I feel that…
4.       In short, my idea is the best because…

p/s:  It’s ok if you don’t speak on 3 points.No penalty as long as you develop even one point well with good elaboration and examples. The 3 points we stress on is just for don’t have a conclusion.No penalty but if you manage to do a conclusion you will logically score higher because your presentation is more structured

·         I agree with you. (NOT: I’m agree.)
·         That’s a great idea!
·         I see your point!
·         That’s an interesting perspective.
·         I like your suggestion.
·         Indeed!
·         I concur with your point of view.
·         I’m sorry but I disagree.(NOT: I’m not agree) ·         I’m afraid I have to disagree with your idea. ·         I don’t see eye to eye with you.
·         That’s not a good idea/suggestion.
·         I beg to differ
·         Excuse me, may I interrupt please.
·         I’d like to add something please.
·         May I say something?
·         Could you please hear me out.
·         Pardon me but could I add something please. Questioning
·         So what do you think, Candidate X?
·         How about your point of view?
·         Candidate X, would you like to give us your opinion? ·         Does anyone agree with me?
·         Why don’t we consider the other points? ·         I don’t understand, can you please repeat? ·         Any suggestions?
·         In conclusion, ALL OF US agree that…
·         To conclude, MOST OF US agree that…
·         In a nutshell, SOME OF US agree that…while SOME OF US prefer… ·         As time is running out, it seems that ALL OF US CAN’T AGREE on which option is the best because each point has many advantages and disadvantages

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