Neurological Disorders
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Running Head: NEUROLOGICAL DISORDERS [Unless a trade name, an acronym, or in the running head, do not use all capitals in academic writing]
Neurological Disorders: Effects on the Brain and Behavior
Quintina Brown
Dr. Ariel Gonzalez
University of Phoenix
July 26, 2010
Neurological disorders are disorders of the nervous system. The disorders are said to result from infections in the brain or spinal cord that lead [Check spelling--if the sentence is in the past tense, the verb conjugation is "led"] to other symptoms like confusion. Also, [Remove comma] neurological disorders result from abnormalities of the nerves. Neurological disorders lead to various symptoms like muscle weaknesses, poor coordination and [Check punctuation: insert a comma before this word if this is the last in a list of more than two -- or if it begins a new clause] confusion. Neurological disorders symptoms lead to paralysis. There are ["There are" is an awkward
Running Head: NEUROLOGICAL DISORDERS [Unless a trade name, an acronym, or in the running head, do not use all capitals in academic writing]
Neurological Disorders: Effects on the Brain and Behavior
Quintina Brown
Dr. Ariel Gonzalez
University of Phoenix
July 26, 2010
Neurological disorders are disorders of the nervous system. The disorders are said to result from infections in the brain or spinal cord that lead [Check spelling--if the sentence is in the past tense, the verb conjugation is "led"] to other symptoms like confusion. Also, [Remove comma] neurological disorders result from abnormalities of the nerves. Neurological disorders lead to various symptoms like muscle weaknesses, poor coordination and [Check punctuation: insert a comma before this word if this is the last in a list of more than two -- or if it begins a new clause] confusion. Neurological disorders symptoms lead to paralysis. There are ["There are" is an awkward