************************************************************************* Smarthinking’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Patrina! I am Esperanza C.‚ your E-structor for this session
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points gives her essay credibility.Silko and her companion Gus were traveling south from Albuquerque‚ when they were stopped by the Border Patrol.The agents ordered them to step out of their car.Silko said the she will never forget that night beside the highway‚that she could sense a feeling of violence and menace.She compares her experience to a report she read on the Argentine police officers who became addicted to interrogation‚ torture‚ and the murder that followed. She thought how easy it would be
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4 Steps to an Effective Scholarship Essay Typically speaking‚ the scholarship essays which students turn in are‚ well‚ to put it mildly‚ not that good. I’m going to generalize‚ but you should know this. They’re typically boring‚ underdeveloped without sufficient details‚ and very unpersuasive. Remember‚ the scholarship essay is a piece of persuasion. The people reviewing your essay will be going through a bunch of applications‚ and you need to distinguish yourself. You need to make the reader care
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asked me to do something and I disobeyed her‚ and I shall be forever glad that I did.”(Marione Ingram 123) Usually a boy who is only 8 years old should be naughty and mischievous. However‚ at the beginning of the story‚ the author tells us that he was thought to be a respectful‚ obedient child by others. The plot that Ingram does not want to sent his baby sister Renate to his cousin’s apartment (123) indicate that Ingram has his own thoughts‚ has his likes and dislikes. But he is so sensitive that
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PART III FUNDAMENTAL RIGHTS Right to Equility 15. Prohibition of discrimination on grounds of religion‚ race‚ caste‚ sex or place of birth.- (1) The State shall not discriminate against any citizen on grounds only of religion‚ race‚ caste‚ sex‚ place of birth or any of them. (2) No citizen shall‚ on grounds only of religion‚ race‚ caste‚ sex‚ place of birth or any of them‚ be subject to any disability‚ liability‚ restriction or condition with regard to- (a) access to shops‚ public restaurants
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An Essay And Article On Economic Crisis Of India India is sadly caught up in Ian economic quagmire so intense and so pronounced that our rulers at present are faced with a very ticklish situation not knowing exactly what to do. That things have come to such a sorry pass compels us to view with scorn the dismal record of the successive governments since we achieved independence. The present serious state of affairs is a cumulative consequence of the accumulated acts of omission and commission‚ of
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America’s Post Civil War Growing Pains J. Jones-Herbert Contemporary U.S. History105 1. Identify two major historical turning points in the period under discussion. There were two major historical turning points during this period; Reconstruction and the Industrial Revolution. With the end of the Civil War in 1865 came the Reconstruction Era which lasted until 1877. During this time the federal government attempted to resolve the issues that resulted from the ending of the Civil War. Although
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WWC Essay The travel essay “Where Worlds Collide” by Pico Iyer shapes a lot of many people’s background. Travelling gives you a lot of challenges in life especially if you are moving from your country to another country that speaks another language and a different culture. One of the biggest challenges in my life was fitting in to the new environment I am going to move to. Moving from a country to another country is not easy for me. I was having a hard time adjusting to my new environment. However
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understand human language and think. Instead‚ Hans was acting based on cues from people around him. Before 1960 Scientists believed that animal’s actions were based on instinct and not on intelligence. Today the perspective has changed‚ animals that are easy to train may be very intelligent‚ however they don’t understand what they are doing. When evaluating animal intelligence‚ we must test them in situations that have meaning for their lives not ours. Toward Inmortality If one considers only the personal
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Bad Behavior Human behavior at times can be unusual and unacceptable. The behavior of people is influenced by their attitude‚ emotions‚ authority‚ and genetics. Behavior is the way a person reacts to different situations. A person’s behavior can be affected by many things‚ such as change of situation or even medical conditions. Every human being has different behavior. A number of human behaviors may lead to other people being affected. At times people do certain behaviors without even realizing
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