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Personal Narrative: Life Lookalike Dolls
“Mommy! Can I please get this life size lookalike doll? Please momma! All my friends have one!” Eight year old Sarah wanted a life size look alike doll. Her mother was against it, but her father was convinced she deserved it. “Daddy is home from work! Maybe he got me the life size look alike doll. Daddy! You're home! So did you get me a life size look alike doll??”
“Well, how can I say no to that adorable looking face?” her dad said to Sarah.
“Oh! Thank you dad! I'm so excited!” Sarah was as happy as she could be. She had all she wanted and later that afternoon, a stylist was coming over to do Sarah and her dolls hair and nails. Sarah decided to call her doll “Emma.” She liked the name. The stylist came over and gave Emma and Sarah curly hair …show more content…
I am very disappointed in you!” Sarah ran off and started to cry. Emma was her favorite toy and she had just got her. At breakfast the next day, the father, Ethan, and Sarah were eating when their mom came in… with Emma. Sarah’s mom put Emma right next to Sarah but wouldn't allow Sarah to touch her.The mother got up to do the dishes, the father sat and ate while working on a computer, and the kids were finishing eating. Just then, the pitcher of water was pushed over,collapsing and spilling all over the father's computer. Hearing the noise, the mother ran over and burst with …show more content…
YOU ARE NO DAUGHTER OF MINE. HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?” Sarah once again tried to protest that it was Emma. She told her mom that Emma was alive. Obviously, her outraged mother wouldn't believe her. “YOU HONESTLY WANT ME TO BELIEVE THAT THIS SWEET LITTLE INNOCENT DOLL DID THIS?!” was her mother's answer to Sarah's statement. “RIGHT NOW, I LOVE THIS DOLL MORE THAN I LOVE YOU! NOW GO TO YOU'RE ROOM. I DON'T WANT TO SEE YOU TILL TOMORROW!” Sarah didn't do it, but no one would believe her. The next morning, Emma had Sarah hostage. Emma used her magic to transform Sarah into herself and herself into Sarah. Emma had become Sarah and Sarah had become a doll. While getting ready for school, fake Sarah (Emma) ate breakfast. Before she went to school her, she called a family meeting. She said she wanted to throw her doll (Sarah) away. Ethan picked up the doll and carried to the trash, but on the way there he noticed
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