My Hometown
Hello sir !
Could you check this "essay" or something i call like that for me please? ..
I wanted to join a exam but i can't find out a person who can check this and i don't do it well. I don't know it is true or false when joining a game with some helps from others, but i think if i join a exam on net, that means people,who makes the game, accepted all your actions to finish your game. So i decide to ask you. I don't know whether it is ok or not too, can you tell me if it is so stupic? Thank you sir very much.
The Requestion of the exam is writing a essay. It says why you want to join in a university? the major you chose ? The reason you think you can get the assistance from the program?
And this it my essay. It is so ashame when i must say that i did this in over 1 month what you can do in only some hours..but i think it is not good.
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I love my hometown, love views from the windown of my house, the ground which is full with childrens' laughs,love the peace of the simple life here...love houses on the back of mountains, love friendly people, too. I love everything belongs my hometown where i was born and grew in 20 years... But I want a change! ... Because all things i love are the outside of the poor here!
My native land is poor. The destitution keeps on pursue persistently the human life in many years..no escape route.... That is a mountainous remote province in Viet nam - a developing country remains numerous difficulty. There , people work hard but still have not enough food because the work and the life here depends on the changeable climate very much. Therefore, children like us grow up in much anxietys and expection to change the life of many generations. The childhood closely connected the memory of my parents' strenousness and pieces of life who can't get out the poor obsess me continously. Sometimes i feel very sad while seeing a beggar
Could you check this "essay" or something i call like that for me please? ..
I wanted to join a exam but i can't find out a person who can check this and i don't do it well. I don't know it is true or false when joining a game with some helps from others, but i think if i join a exam on net, that means people,who makes the game, accepted all your actions to finish your game. So i decide to ask you. I don't know whether it is ok or not too, can you tell me if it is so stupic? Thank you sir very much.
The Requestion of the exam is writing a essay. It says why you want to join in a university? the major you chose ? The reason you think you can get the assistance from the program?
And this it my essay. It is so ashame when i must say that i did this in over 1 month what you can do in only some hours..but i think it is not good.
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I love my hometown, love views from the windown of my house, the ground which is full with childrens' laughs,love the peace of the simple life here...love houses on the back of mountains, love friendly people, too. I love everything belongs my hometown where i was born and grew in 20 years... But I want a change! ... Because all things i love are the outside of the poor here!
My native land is poor. The destitution keeps on pursue persistently the human life in many years..no escape route.... That is a mountainous remote province in Viet nam - a developing country remains numerous difficulty. There , people work hard but still have not enough food because the work and the life here depends on the changeable climate very much. Therefore, children like us grow up in much anxietys and expection to change the life of many generations. The childhood closely connected the memory of my parents' strenousness and pieces of life who can't get out the poor obsess me continously. Sometimes i feel very sad while seeing a beggar