Examples Of Improving Thesis Statements · The War of 1812 came before the American Civil War. (Bad example) · The War of 1812 set into motion the main events that caused the American Civil War. (Good example) · The judicial system needs to have power over Congress in order to do its job. (Bad example) · In order for the judicial system to judge whether a law is constitutional‚ it must have the power to overturn a temporary law of Congress. (Good example) · People need to stay healthy for
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Thesis Statement: In this research paper‚ six points about teens and driving include I the laws‚ II cell phones‚ III parents‚ IV facts‚ V physical and demands‚ and VI statistics. First‚ if a teenager wants a driver’s license‚ they need to know the laws. The first step is to fill out a license application with your firs‚ last name‚ and date. The laws says non-citizens cannot (“Obtaining a Learner’s Permit” 1). The article states‚ “With the passage of SB 226 (Joshua’s law) by the 2005 Georgia general
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military have been inspired by someone or something to put their life on the line for the sake of their country. John McCain and his heroic efforts during the Vietnamese war are a great example of how the Hemingway Hero inspires people in the world today. John McCain gets his inspiration from Ernest Hemingway’s 1940 novel For Whom the Bell Tolls‚ in which he says he wants to be just like the main character: Robert Jordan (Stamburg). John McCain spent five and a half years in captivity in North Vietnam
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would begin my introduction with background information about organ donation/transplantation like when it first came into the medical field‚ as well as what were its major milestones in history so far. I would introduce my thesis in the introduction paragraph. My thesis statement is‚ organ transplants have revolutionized medicine and have become a major part of saving a human life and there should be more organ donors each year to help contribute to this great cause and keep on saving human lives.
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Gabriel Garcia Marquez‚ the author of “A very Old Man with Enormous Wings” tells a story in a small village where life was normal and simple‚ a very old man with wings was found near Pelayo courtyard. The author narrates how everybody was curious to find out the new event‚ however‚ once perceived it was an old‚ very old man with disintegrated wing and unable to communicate‚ the old man lost the fame and interest of the villagers. The author of this story is trying to tell us how society as individual
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Ecological Cataclysm Ascribed to Synthetic Fertilizers: A Sentence Outline Thesis Statement: To ensure the preservation of mammalian populations native to North America‚ it is vital for Americans to establish an understanding of what synthetic fertilizer‚ along with acknowledging how its excessive application is cataclysmic for aquaculture and wildlife ecosystems. I. To comprehend the magnitude of synthetic fertilizer effects‚ it is vital knowing what synthetic fertilizer is‚ on a molecular level
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Flight by Doris Lessing Flight - Text Analysis In this assignment I’m going to analyze the short story‚ Flight by Doris Lessing. This short-story was published in 1957‚ in a collection of short stories entitled The Habit of Loving. This is an old short story but it is a very popular one among many. Dorris Lessing (93) was born in 1919‚ in Khermanhah in Persia (now Iran) and she is a British novelist‚ poet‚ playwright‚ librettist‚ biographer and a short story writer. Her parents were British
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Reasons for the Outcome of the Tiananmen Square Protests of 1989 Topic and Thesis Statement In April 1989‚ people from all over China gathered in Beijing’s Tiananmen Square to mourn the death of the Communist Party Leader Hu Yaobang. The gathering grew larger each day and more and more people expressed their dissatisfaction with the party. People could not see the results of the reforms that they had been promised and students‚ in particular‚ were agitated due to the rising corruption in the party
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Associate Program Material Appendix F Outline and Thesis Statement Guide (Apple) Mac vs. (Microsoft) Windows PC Although Windows is a household name‚ Apple is fast becoming the company that technology users look to. This thesis will be discussing the pros and the better quality of the Apple Mac OS X as opposed to the Windows PC. An Apple Mac is virtually better that a Windows PC because of its securer platform‚ enhanced audio features and its excellent reputation. I. (Apple)
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arrested and put in jail for possession of marijuana. Their son was sent to child protective services and then put into a foster home. The police called this a successful mission. ” Bill Maher”. Thesis Statement: Legalizing marijuana would greatly help bring the U.S out of the recession. Credible Statement: On November 2‚ 2010 an act known as Proposition 19 lost in a vote of 54% to 46%. This act would have allowed for the legalization of marijuana in California.
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