Overall I liked your write up you did a good job. I did offer some micro and macro suggestions below. I did copy and paste your document into word and it appears to be short of the five and a half page minimum? I also highlighted in red some spelling issues and sentence structure issues for your consideration. 1. What is the writer’s claim? * The writers claim is that asthma should be considered a disability in the workforce. 2. What three reasons does the writer give in support
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What you are doing is looking at the toy in terms of finding what it provides and evaluating whether this provision is good or not‚ in terms of development and other things that support children. Also things like safety‚ price etc. So you could make a checklist of things like is it ?: appealing to children‚ durable safe age appropriate developmentally supportive ( I would elabaorate on this by looking at each developmental area and/or at specific things like how a climbing frame could support
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The works various‚ unique curvy geometric shapes and array of many bright colors makes the work standout. The work immediately catches the eye‚ it is very appealing. Throughout the work there is a variety of vibrant hues such as yellow‚ orange‚ purple‚ green‚ blue‚ turquoise‚ and pink that creates a repetitive geometric pattern. The work uses both primary and secondary colors and combines warm and cool colors to create contrast. With so many creative colors it helps each individual one attract attention
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Many criticisms can be heard or read of the Obama administration‚ especially if coming from the Republicans. But something must be to consider‚ Obama broke with many state policies of Bush Jrs‚ especially in foreign policy towards Latin America. A thorough analysis of whether Obama is more pragmatic and less ideological than Bush jrs. But there is something that differentiates the foreign policy of Obama and his predecessor. Obama seeks to defend human rights and democracy in Latin America‚ seeks
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Hailey Davis JMC - 1013 Introduction to Mass Communications 22nd September 2015 Description: The segment starts out with Bill Whitaker talking about the Cleveland Division’s effect to repair the relationship between them and the community. Bill then is seen interviewing Cleveland Police Chief Calvin Williams‚ where he bluntly asks Williams if there are bad guys in their P.D. Williams answers - “Of course there are. And it’s my job to weed out the bad people from this division..” It is evident
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Sample Essay Exam #2 Assignment: Complete the sentence above with an appropriate phrase. Then write an essay supporting your completed statement. Time allowed: 45 minutes Response #1 Have you ever imagined how your life would be different if a key person were not in it‚ like a mother‚ father‚ spouse‚ or child? Some people are so integral to making us who we are that without them‚ our very identity would be changed. My grandmother is a key figure in my life who has left an indelible impression
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Good introduction to the whole assignment with immediate reference to current marketing theory Good introduction to the whole assignment with immediate reference to current marketing theory Analyse According to Hollensen (2007) ‚ « global marketing consists of finding and satisfying global customers needs better than the competition‚ and of coordinating marketing activities within the constraint of the global environment ». In this essay‚ we come to think about: In what way Primark’s strategy
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I. Executive Summary The proposal introduces an educational program designed for the children victimized by the Typhoon Yolanda that hit the Philippines‚ particularly Leyte and Samar recently. The contents of this proposal are the purpose‚ scope‚ budget‚ strengths‚ weaknesses‚ opportunities‚ and threats of the suggested project. II. Introduction A. Purpose The main objective of this project is to be able to give the children victimized by the Typhoon Yolanda in the Philippines especially
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Conference on Telecommunications in Modern Satellite‚ Cable‚ and Broadcast Services-TELSIKS 2003‚ 2003‚ pp. 192-201. [16] G. L. Knestrick‚ T. H. Cosden and J. A. Curcio‚ "Atmospheric attenuation coefficients in the visible and infrared regions‚" Naval Research Laboratory‚ 1961. [17] Anonymous. Calculation of radiometric properties. Gigahertz Optik. 2004. Available: http://www.gigahertz-optik.com/database_en/html/applications-tutorials/tutorials/ii.-propertiesand-concepts-of-light-and-color/ii.5.-calculation-of-radiometric-quantities---examples
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Critique of Journal article The article being critiqued is titled; Randomised controlled trial of motivational interviewing compared with drug information and advice for early intervention among young cannabis users written by Jim McCambridge‚ Renee L Slym and John Strang published in 2008 in the journal Addiction‚ pages 103-111. Cannabis is the most widely used illegal drug and poses many physical‚ social and psychological risks especially in young people‚ it seems that even with the current primary
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