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amounts they spend. The effects of not keeping a personal budget can be‚ but are not limited to not having any saving for unexpected expenses‚ going into debt or bankruptcy‚ causing intensified stress on a household‚ and the lack of responsibility which causes over spending. The biggest effect that can come from not keeping a personal budget is not having a savings fund for unexpected expenses. Everyone should have a savings fund. No one knows when an unexpected emergency will occur‚ such as a broken
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Persuasive Essay on Marijuana Legalization Javier A. Ocasio COMM/215 Essentials of College Writing 1/29/2015 Nicole Svee Magann Persuasive Essay on Marijuana Legalization Introduction Marijuana is the most commonly used illegal drug in the United States. Mainly people think of marijuana of the dirty drug out on the street‚ when actually marijuana has been proven to help people medically. Drugs are not a new subject in this world‚ but as technology advances‚ new uses for them are found. Cannabis
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Cause and Effect Essay Topics A cause and effect essay aims at explaining the reasons and results of an event or situation. • It is one the most popular essay types in the academic world. • It is beneficial for a student to write a cause and effect essay because it propels him to think of the situation in depth to come up with the reasons for the birth of that situation and its eventual impact on everything it affects. • It encourages the mind to think analytically and investigate a situation
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The revolutionary war was a key point in history. In this essay I will be discussing the following things‚ causes of the Revolutionary war‚ results of the Revolutionary war and how the british were involved during the Revolutionary war. To begin with I will be going over the causes of the war that include acts‚taxes and the economy’s effect on the start of the revolutionary war.One of the biggest causes of the start of the american revolution was the increasing taxes from the British parliament
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Depression and Anxiety Sarah Gartin COM/155 March 17‚ 2013 Tressa Cook Gray [APA style looks good!] Depression and Anxiety Depression and anxiety are two common disorders that many Americans deal with day in and day out. So‚ individual Americans may ask‚ are we anxious‚ or are we depressed? Anxiety and depression are thought of as two distinct disorders. However‚ in this world‚ many people suffer from both conditions. Knowing the similarities‚ differences‚ treatments‚ and prevention/reduction
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The Great depression started in 1929 and ended in 1939.The Great Depression was the longest lasting economic downturn in the history of the western industrialized world. It all started just after the stock market crashed in October 1929. The crash wiped out many people’s investment. When bank failures erased the savings of those who weren’t even invested in the stock market. Even though it all failed I would have still been saved or prevented with better regulations. There were more than 13 through
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Many times I have had discussions about religion‚ and whether or not there is a higher force controlling everything we do. This discussion is very old‚ Greek and Roman philosophers already discussed whether or not there is a higher force‚ and if there is‚ does this higher force have any influence upon our lives? One of the major arguments for creationism‚ the theory that states that everything was created by a higher force‚ is that we as humans are so complex that someone‚ or something‚ must have
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a certain topic‚ it’s based on our opinion. A writer demonstrates persuasive writing by giving evidence and supporting the right side or the bad side of a idea. They are trying make their point across to make the reader go on their side. Two examples of persuasive essays are the book “To Kill A Mockingbird” and the Article of the Week/Youtube video #9 “Texting”. Article of the Week #9 shows a lot of persuasive writing from the speaker. This video showed how texting is either
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Introduction: For test responses: Should be 5-8 sentences (typed). For convincing/persuasive essays: 4-6 lines 1. Your first sentence for the introductions: This statement is true/ not true (if question is asking you that). Eg. The government is way too easy on hoon drivers. Discuss. 2. Be spontaneous i.e. natural and directly to what the question asks you. Eg. Do you agree that Brian is the perfect gentleman? Yes‚ I agree (spontaneous). Main body paragraph: Should be between
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