Smarthinking’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! *Strengths of the essay: Hi‚ Britanny. My name is Kathleen‚ and I am going to help you strengthen your essay. Let’s get started. A major strengh
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The phenomenon of Black Friday Bustling city streets‚ hour-long lines‚ and retail store chaos: only one scenario explains the commonality between these situations‚ shopping on Black Friday. For half a century Black Friday has become an unofficial retail holiday in the United States. It is a day that offers incredible discounts and killer deals‚ and most notoriously‚ it brings a frenzy of crazed shoppers to local retailers looking to save on purchases. Marketing strategies‚ paired with consumers’
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A Leap Reader is a product which allows children to learn how to read and write by sounding out words and guiding letter step-by-step interactively‚ designed by Leap Frog in 2008 (Frog‚ 2008). Leap Reader engages kids in imaginative stories with lively character voices while building vocabulary skills and increasing reading comprehension skills. Collaborative handwriting helps children to write step by step on a mess-free‚ no ink Leap Frog learning paper. Also‚ Leap Reader has a built-in audio player
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Amanda Gutierrez Professor Andrea Barclay English 60 11 February 2015 Black Friday Black Friday‚ because only in America people trample each other for sales exactly one day after being thankful for what they already have. For most people it’s the most anticipated day of the year. It’s the day people are still recovering from their Thanksgiving feasts and maybe even still a little drunk. Black Friday kick starts everyone’s Christmas shopping. Shoppers all over America line up days even weeks ahead
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Shannon Danner 335986651 Assignment #4 Black Friday Analysis Black Friday is the following Thanksgiving Day in the United States‚ traditionally the beginning of the Christmas shopping season. Black Friday is not an official holiday‚ but many workers have the day off as part of the Thanksgiving holiday‚ this increases the number of potential shoppers. Retailers often decorate for the Christmas and holiday season weeks beforehand. Many retailers open extremely early‚ with
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Should Retail Stores Be Open On Black Friday? I Think Not! Should Retail Stores Be Open On Black Friday? I Think Not! a Persuasive Thesis Statement on stores opening on Thanksgiving: Even though stores stay open‚ stores shouldn’t stay open because credit cards can get maxed out and people can or have died or get injuries during Black Friday. I am against Black Friday because I don’t like how people act when they are trying to get good sales instead of spending time with their family. My
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How far do sources 11 & 12 challenge the view presented in source 10 about the conduct of the police on Black Friday? The three sources to be compared are all in relation to the events that occurred on “Black Friday”‚ particularly surrounding the conduct of the metropolitan police. Source 10‚ taken from “The Times” newspaper presents the view that the police were more victims of the women and raiders that they were trying to control‚ and that it took some effort to restrain the women that were
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tell me‚ “were short staff today so your on the drive thru”! I hate working the drive but my positive attitude was not going to allow that to ruin my day. So after I have my bagel‚ I unlock my cash vault and begin my morning regimen to start the busy Friday. I take a deep breath and say to myself‚ I feel good today so assuming attitudes are contagious my customers should feel good too‚ right?... Something in my mind told me that even though I was in such high spirits‚ some sort of catastrophe was going
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Starting a Business LLC In starting a business‚ the first thing you need to do is research. Does your idea have a value and is there a demand? Second‚ obtain and complete the needed forms and fees. For the state of Utah you will need the following: Articles of organization and $75.00 Appointed registered agent Operating agreement Comply with all federal and State taxes Application for reserving the name of the LLC and $22.00 Class fee of $50.00 ($15.00 for renewals)
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Research Paper The Great Leap Forward 4/18/13 Have you been worked so hard for something that was a failure all along? Civilians living in China in the 1930’s were worked to absolute death in an attempt to have an economy to rival American economies. This was lead by the dictator (so to say) at the time. He tried to have small groups of communities which had worker‚ farming‚ and cooking groups to better the economy because it used less materials and money. The Great Leap Forward was one of the
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