Writing stories Introduction and tips: ANSWER THE QUESTION PLAN your story. REVISE your story to correct mistakes. Give your story a TITLE. Make sure you have at least 4 paragraphs. Paragraph 1 – background information. Paragraphs 2 and 3 the main part of the story. Paragraph 4 – EITHER the climax OR key moment of the story OR what happened after the climax. Don’t change the words you are given at all. (If there are words given) Read the words you are given carefully. Sometimes
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102 Lab Report: Ventilation and Oxygen Consumption in Fish Methods: The lab consists of two experiments repeated over a period one hour with fifteen minutes interval‚ in order to determine the effect of weight and temperature on ventilation and oxygen consumption of Carassius auratus‚ commonly known as goldfish. Each experiment was carried out by five groups. Measurement of ventilation was determined by recording operculum movement of the fish. Oxygen consumption was measured using oxygen probes
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are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should be hyphenated. Also‚ black man against a white woman - in this
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believing‚ and generally speaking‚ this will eventually conflict with the views and values of others. In order to get our point across or to find out what other people believe and why‚ we will need to negotiate to reach an understanding. Mary Roach writes about some personal experiences she had with arguing in her essay "Meet the Bickersons‚" which humorously accounts her trials with relationships. To be sure‚ there are many benefits and also disadvantages from arguing; knowing what to say‚ how to
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RAM Essay Discuss the issue of Random Access Memory using the presentation material from class and the textbook. You may supplement this with material from web sites but be sure to include the URL of any web sites referenced (always cite to avoid plagiarism) and use only sites that are reputable and verifiable. Please avoid Wikipedia. Issues you want to consider discussing include: • The magic of RAM (especially in the Windows environment). • What is Cache RAM and what do the different types
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become weak and our minds and bodies start to work slower. In the story “God is Not a Fish Inspector‚” Fusi is determined to live how he wants‚ without the interference of others. Fusi does not want his freedom to be taken away from him and he does not want to just wait for death. Fusi has different types of conflict with two of the main characters: his daughter‚ Emma‚ who wants to punish him for being old‚ and the fish inspectors‚ who have taken away his fishing licence due to old age. Most of all Fusi
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Shopping Malls Shopping malls are the important part of lives of some people in today’s era. An essay on shopping mall all the benefits of a shopping mall. The shopping malls are the places that are packed in weekends. The malls of today’s world are huge and provide all the products that a man desires as a source of entertainment. During weekends people come with the families for shopping and fun in the shopping malls. There are large in size with hundreds of shops. If one enters a shopping
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The Rainbow Fish Rainbow Fish‚ with his beautiful sparkling silver scales‚ was the most beautiful fish in the ocean. Despite Rainbow Fish’s beauty‚ he was not happy; this was because he had no friends. When he thoughtlessly hurt the feeling of one of his many admirers‚ the other fish in the ocean began to ignore him. Rainbow Fish’s beautiful scales are the most important thing in the ocean to him. Because of this he was faced to decide whether his beauty is more important than having friends. Rainbow
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How to Write the Topic Sentence Topic sentences are often incorrectly defined as the first sentences in a paragraph. Topic sentences‚ in fact‚ can be situated as the second or third sentence. Topic sentence is about introducing the main idea of a paragraph‚ not about chronology. It should discuss an idea only in generic terms without providing too many details. How to Write Supporting Sentences Supporting sentences are also called detail sentences and they constitute the body of the paragraph
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The job of the old man was to catch fish‚ where the job for the boy is to go on learning on what life stands for. The man struggled to do the one thing he set out for‚ to catch the marlin. Although he struggled for many days‚ he finally accomplished his goal. The young boy struggles with learning new things and how to be grown. The fish represents the man’s life. He struggled to get hold of the fish as the man does with life. Although he finally got the fish‚ it just shows that at one point the
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