and uses a range of basic cohesive devices; there is a logical structure and cohesive devices add clarity to the message - makes excellent use of a basic range of vocabulary‚ grammatical structures and conventions‚ accurately; occasional errors do not interfere with communication - writes with a sense of audience. - All facts and details are interesting‚ clear and coherent - All necessary elements are well-presented and organized - Opinions are justified (ami ou ennemi) - Student correctly
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atmosphere for at least 14 million years. They didnt expect water samples from Lake Vostok to contain alien life‚ though any life it would contain may have taken a slightly different evolutionary path than what appears on the planet today. So now do you think
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believe that Isabel should not support the rebels because she is owned by a Loyalists couple. Isabel is just a slave; and her opinions do not matter. This is wrong. This gives her even more of a reason to join the rebels because she is treated badly by people who support the King. The Locktons beat Isabel‚ take away her sister‚ ban any privilege she is given‚ and do whatever is in their power to hurt her. The rebels treated her better
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Randolph “Andre” Rivera Mrs. Moreland English 11 April 16‚ 2012 The Things They Carried In the book‚ The Things They Carried written by Tim O’Brien‚ the challenges faced by war are explained in the form of stories. The effects that war can have on a soldier in Vietnam are not solely limited to the physical state‚ but also the mental state‚ as is shown when O’Brien introduces the character Mary Anne Bell in chapter nine. The corruption that war brought to an individual’s life led to
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Top 12 things to do in Dubai before you die From enjoying a bird’s eye view of the skyscrapers‚ sipping a drink in the coolest lounge‚ and soaring the sky like a bird‚ Dubai is a city for those seeking leisure and adventure. While there are tons of activities worth indulging in‚ we have brought you the top 12 things to do in Dubai before you die. Let your eyes pop out with amazement by looking at Burj Khalifa This stunning structure has crossed all the merits of architecture and engineering
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believed that the truth could be more effectively communicated that way. He thought that the idea of creating a story that technically was false yet had truthful aspects portrays war stories in the best way. Also‚ precise facts do not connect to a reader emotionally and do not help the reader understand to the full extent of what they went through away at war.
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The Funniest Thing That Ever Happened to Me I was a seven-year-old boy‚ and was fairly close to my grandparents. My family has a strong Chinese background as my grandparents were refugees who fled from China in the 1940s. My grandmother‚ just like most old Chinese people‚ did not understand even the tiniest bit of modern technology. Moreover‚ since grandfather died‚ she started to transform her house into a mini zoo. Her sheer lack of understanding in technology and her wonderful family of animals
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In several stories from The Things They Carried‚ by Tim O’Brien deals with the way that American soldiers of the Vietnam War related to being "in country‚" or out of their own country and halfway across the world. O’Brien creates the concept that Vietnam‚ and the war there‚ is of "another world" throughout his stories. None of the soldiers he writes about feel at home in Vietnam‚ and none of them successfully adapt emotionally to being so far from home. O’Brien subtly introduces the concept of
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Bio 101 Chapter 1 Diversity of Life 3 Domains / 6 Kingdoms Archaea / Archaea Bacteria / Bacteria Eukarya / Protista‚ Plantae‚ Fungi‚ Animalia Kingdom Archaea: Prokaryotes; Ancient Bacteria Kingdom Bacteria: Prokaryotes; Common Bacteria Kingdom Protista Eukaryotes; Unicellular organisms (small) Algae (unicellular‚ colonial‚ small or multicellular‚ Large) Kingdom Fungi Eukaryotes; Non-photosynthetic‚ multicellular (except yeast)‚ External
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Gangyi Wu Mark Scamahorn Eng 110‚ March 15‚ 2012 Desperate to survival How can a big brother who loses his parents in a short period of time survive? How is it possible for him to take care of his little brother at the same time? In A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius‚ the author Dave Eggers describes a long dialogue between him and his brother Toph. In fact‚ the dialogue is not happening in the real world; instead‚ it is a “me and I” dialogue. Dave talks about his long day in the beginning
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