It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should
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Measuring the Standard of Living Economists want to be able to make statements that compare the standard of living between different countries or between different time periods. This is quite tricky. As we have just observed‚ people enjoy a very different mix of products and services at different points in time. In fact‚ a likely reason that DeLong seized on the example of flour is that flour is one of the few products that we buy today that we can picture being purchased 500 years ago. Economists
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L. Robert Kohls opens his book‚ Survival Kit for Overseas Living‚ with a preface that reminds its reader that even if you have chosen to live your life up until now within your own culture and/or social groups people in today’s world are expected to know and be able to function within society at an intercultural level of acceptance and unity. The purpose of this book is help Americans to see what intercultural skills we already have‚ those that must be developed to ‘survive’‚ and to become aware/more
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Living Without a Father When I tell people that my dad is missing‚ they normally don’t believe me. But it’s true‚ I haven’t seen him in just over eleven years. And no one else in my family has seen or heard from him in just over eleven years. His disappearance has affected my life in many ways: the ways in which I view the opposite sex‚ the outside world and myself are forever tainted as a result of missing the key element of a father. His absence has caused a lot of agony‚ pain‚ and confusion
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Living in LOVE Tamarra Subramony South Africa One morning I walked into the section of the children’s ward in which I work‚ and was greeted by an intelligible wave of excited chatter and the giggling of mothers. “Do you know what they are saying doctor?” asked the nearest mum. “No‚” I replied‚ feeling intrigued. “They’re saying that when you come in‚ they feel as if their mother has arrived.” These simple words stunned me and I was moved to tears. A feeling of overwhelming gratitude to
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Chapter 1 - Purpose for living Have you ever paused to ask yourself these: What am I doing in this world? Why am I still alive? What is the purpose of my existence? If you feel that much of your life is purposeless‚ let me assure you right away that God does have a purpose for your life – a high and noble purpose! There are two major purposes for living – to know God wholeheartedly and to be aware of others. I assume you are already aware of God‚ so are you aware of others? Do you care for those
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On the surface I think I am like most young and modern American women: I take school seriously‚ I have dreams and goals for the future that I am determined to make happen‚ and I don’t expect anyone to do the hard work for me. I come from what is an increasingly normal background: my parents are divorced and I live with my mom and sisters and only occasionally see my dad since he now lives on the other side of the country‚ but I still feel very lucky to have a supportive‚ if spread out‚ family behind
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formal letter 22 Road Street Cambridge CB21 17 May 2011 Town Gazette Human Resources Department 29 West Station Way Hypermarket HY23 5GC Application for the position in administration Dear Sir or Madam‚ I am writing to apply for the position of The Town Gazzete administrator‚ which was advertised in the local newspaper. I am really interested in media and I want to join your professional work team. As you will notice on the attached CV‚ I have graduated from Bronx Academy High School
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Since I have decided to become a better volleyball player‚ I will condition and study the sport. First‚ every day I will go to the gym‚ run for fifteen minutes to help with my endurance and lift weights every other day‚ such as squatting and deadlifting. By going to the gym‚ it will help me to keep up with my more advanced volleyball friends during long rallies and long games. In order to help with my volleyball skills‚ I plan on going to local San Jose open gyms. At the open gyms‚ I will focus on
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Learning through Experience Filled with eye-opening and complex ideas‚ Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse highlights the life of a man striving to achieve peace and enlightenment. Starting out as a boy‚ Siddhartha started as a Brahman‚ to a Samana‚ to a merchant‚ and finally to a ferryman. Many life lessons can be uncovered from the life of Siddhartha. Blazoned through the journey of Siddhartha‚ SIddhartha learns the life lessons of being grateful‚ learning from oneself and past mistakes‚ and learning how
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