I’m happy to help you with your essay today. I see that you have asked for help with your thesis and use of resources; however‚ I feel that some work on your content development as well as your thesis will make your essay stronger and more effective overall‚ so let’s get started. Summary This essay discusses the common causes of eating disorders in teenagers and defines bulimia and anorexia nervosa‚ the two most common eating disorders. Strengths This essay is well-written at the sentence
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Essay Writing Outline 1. Introduction Thesis statement: Consuming Instant Noodles in a large number is dangerous for several reasons and gives some effects to our body. 2. Body Body paragraph 1 Topic sentence: There are several causes why instant noodles are dangerous for our health. Cause1: Instant noodles contain of wax which is very harmful for our body. Cause2: Instant noodles also contain of high sodium. Cause3: An MSG in instant noodles accumulates the chemical substance in our body
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Jefferson Almonte Cause & Effect Essay Professor Zaluda November 11‚ 2012 Teen Pregnancy In today’s society‚ many young teens have begun to experience unprotected sex. Having unprotected sex may result in sexually transmitted diseases (also known as STD) and/or pregnancy. Although some STD’s are curable‚ they would have to be cured immediately. As for the main focus‚ teenage pregnancy‚ many teenagers do not realize the responsibility‚ commitment‚ and hard work they have to
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old age. Cigarette smoke is the leading cause of emphysema. When inhaling tobacco smoke‚ it temporarily paralyzes the microscopic hairs that line bronchial air ways. These hairs sweep irritants and germs out of a person’s airways‚ but when smoke interferes with this sweeping movement‚ from the paralysis‚ irritants remain in a person’s bronchial tubes Emphysema is a progressive disease of the lungs that can cause shortness of breath. The physical shapes of the lungs are
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Jordan Trimble William J. Pyda English Composition: Monday & Wednesday 8am-9:25am September 15‚ 2014 Cause & Effect Essay Have you ever felt like you needed to prove something to yourself and to others but you weren’t ready to accept the challenge? Well‚ for me it all started right after I graduated high school in June of 2012. I was excited to finally be done with school‚ yet at the same time I was nervous and afraid to start college a few months later. Just like a lot of other kids‚ I was still
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Tyler Wilson Professor Kabaji Freshman Composition Cause and Effect 5 July 2015 Essay Preliminary Work 1. What topic did you choose from the homework section? Why do so many adults return to college later in life. 2. What is the thesis statement of this essay? These “non-traditional” adult students have many reasons for continuing their education or pursuing new occupational goals altogether. 3. What are the three topic sentences? A common reason people return to college is for work related motives
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Leo Zaldivar Professor Farve English 68 20 October 2009 Cause/Effect Essay Propaganda Techniques in Commercials Thesis: Michael Jordan’s “Let Your Game Speak” Nike commercial uses three different propaganda techniques to promote a pair of Jordan’s shoes. Topic Sentence: The Nike commercial uses the testimonial technique. Topic Sentence: In addition‚ the commercial also uses the plain folk technique. Topic Sentence: The band wagon technique is implied as well. Conclusion: In conclusion
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Deforestation is a huge issue! It creates endangered/ extinction of a species‚ if they don’t become endangered then they move and have to constantly adapt‚ and when they have to move into our home areas‚ they give us deadly diseases. The purpose of this essay is to inform the reader about deforestation on animals and humans. When we cut down forests animals have a high chance of becoming extinct and a higher chance of becoming endangered. About a century ago‚ there were roughly 100‚000 tigers in the
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not aware of the effects they will face during their life‚ when they do not keep a personal budget. Most people are generally thrown into the real world when it comes to spending money. Some people are not concerned with the amounts they spend. The effects of not keeping a personal budget can be‚ but are not limited to not having any saving for unexpected expenses‚ going into debt or bankruptcy‚ causing intensified stress on a household‚ and the lack of responsibility which causes over spending.
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Causes of Teen Depression The adolescence age can be a stormy and difficult time‚ even for the well adjusted teen. Depression hits adults and teens alike and can have overboard consequences when the teen can feel overwhelmed with such emotional stress and are not aware on how to handle it. After noticing the signs of depression and why they may be feeling that way‚ it is extremely important that they get help and treatment for themselves. This can help make the situation easier not just for
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