wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Gregory! I am Kobe F.‚ and I am happy to read and comment on your work today. I like your choice of Jimmy Cross for your discussion because he suffers the most important conflict between desire and duty in O’Brien’s story. Below I suggest some improvements to your thesis statement‚ conclusion‚ and comma use to help you enhance your paper. The ERF and embedded comments include the draft being on topic and grammatically correct as in “Help Requested.” So here we go!
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AP2630 Unit 6 Case Study 1: Chloe’s Story Date: October 27‚ 2014 Which serous membrane in Chloe’s abdomen most likely contains the greatest amount of adipose tissue? The peritoneum is the largest serous membrane of the body and it contains the greater omentum‚ the largest peritoneal fold. The greater omentum generally contains a considerable amount of adipose tissue. The adipose tissue can greatly expand with weight gain What involuntary muscular process initiated by deglutition of water may
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Long ago‚ there was a newly trained warrior from across the seas of Antonica‚ the race of the forgotten iksar being newly re-discovered had begun the life of one iksar. This neophyte warrior’s name was Lyzzard. Lyzzard trained outside of his hometown killing scorpions and scaled wolf pups until he gained the level of 5. At this time he was getting bored of the creatures that inhabited the outside area of the gates of Cabilis and noticed that the road lead down into a pit. When Lyzzard decided
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STORY OF NATIVITY About two thousand years ago‚ in the town of Nazareth‚ there lived a young woman named Mary. She was engaged to be married to Joseph‚ a carpenter. One day an angel appeared before her and told her she had been chosen to have a special baby. The baby would be God’s son and she must call him Jesus. Soon after the angel’s visit‚ Mary and Joseph were married. Mary was due to have her baby when they were told they had to go on a long journey to Bethlehem‚ which was where Joseph came
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couples. Kristine‚ Nora’s best friend also shows how helpless and dependent women are at that time period. She leaves her true love and marries someone she doesn’t love because she needs a wealthy husband who can take care of her family. From Kristine’s story‚ there’s also a controversy. I believe that at that time‚ most rich men should know that a lot of women just marry so they could have their families financially taken care of. In Kristine’s case‚ she leaves her husband after her younger brothers are
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Hassan’s Story By Britnie Hutcherson A & P I May 16‚ 2013 Hassan’s Story A. Baru is using surface markings to identify the gender of a skull. What two major types of surface markings do bones have? The two major types of surface markings are depressions (or openings) and processes. Depressions and openings form joints or passageways for blood vessels and nerves. Processes form joints or points of attachment for ligaments or tendons. B. Why are Liu and Hassan surprised to find
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Brief – The protagonist of the story is Mary Jane‚ whose husband dies a sudden death. Due to it‚ she faces the full responsibility of bringing up her children. But she never gave up‚ and faced the responsibility by working hard in her job in at “First Guarantee Financial”. As a result she developed a good reputation at her work place and got promoted as manager in operations and was shifted to “Third Floor” of the office. Third floor of the office was regarded as “Toxic Energy Dump” as it was full
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Okonkwo’s story is similar to the western tragedy and the tragic hero because in the western tragedy it says how the main character has great importance not only culturally but economically. Okonkwo is also well respected in his tribe and admired due to the wrestling match he had with a bully of the tribe. The only thing from the western tragedy is that onkonkwo didn’t have a noble birth of childhood because his father was a failure and owed the whole tribe money. The tragic
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Casul‚ Ruselle Anne C. STS40 (TF 7:30-9:00) 11/11/14 The Story of the Stuff by Annie Leonard- Reaction Paper The Story of the Stuff which is made by Annie Leonard was very interesting and enlightening. It made me realize that no matter how small the stuffs we use in our everyday life‚ it should not be taken for granted because the economic system is in crisis and we can’t continue to run on a linear system since we live on a planet of limited resources. People become obsessed with consumerism
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The 1950’s and the 1960’s and the American Woman : the transition from the ”housewife” to the feminist Vanessa Martins Lamb To cite this version: Vanessa Martins Lamb. The 1950’s and the 1960’s and the American Woman : the transition from the ”housewife” to the feminist. 2011‚ pp.106. <dumas-00680821> HAL Id: dumas-00680821 http://dumas.ccsd.cnrs.fr/dumas-00680821 Submitted on 2 Apr 2012 HAL is a multi-disciplinary open access archive for the deposit and dissemination of scientific research documents
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