to Cocoa Bottom) makes it sound more authentic and real. Is there anything else which you thought worked well? Add you own ideas/examples to the list above. Whilst this is a good example of descriptive writing there are some punctuation errors. Can you spot them? Is there anything you don’t like about the writing? How do you think it could be improved upon? B. Now we are going to look at some further examples of good descriptive writing‚ this time from accomplished writers. In this extract
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being a bully is probably not the product of one’s personality or background. Bullying may be a natural response to specific situations‚ hard-wired into the human brain. Given the right environmental conditions‚ anyone‚ even the most easygoing person‚ can quickly turn mean. To arrive at this conclusion‚ researchers examined thirty sample populations‚ or "teams‚" consisting of twenty individuals each. In each of these teams‚ a leader was selected. Not just any leader would do. The population of leaders
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[pic] OASIS COLLEGE No. 2‚ 4 & 6‚ Jalan 2/131A‚ Batu 5½‚ Jalan Kelang Lama‚ 58200 Kuala Lumpur‚ Malaysia. Tel : 03-7781 6788 Fax: 03-7785 8788 Email : kolejoasisc@gmail.com Website: www.oasis.edu.my SUBJECT: PROJECT MANAGMENT TOPIC: MALAYSIA AIRLINES (MAS) |NAME |ID NUMBER
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individual in order for you to have the sincerity and dedication to your course. Some prefer to take up the course that most of their friends would take because they want to be alongside each other. The bond of their friendship is strong enough that it can influence and encourage others to be with them. They like to feel that they belong to‚ and this is only possible if they have circle of friends that surrounds them and are able to make them feel needed. College life is difficult and complicated that
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Society ’s Ongoing Problem: Prejudice To: McGuinness From: Date: September 30th 2013 ENG 3U You ’re not born prejudiced; you ’re taught it”(Swindoll). Prejudice is the attitude and opinion held by one person or group about another. Any unequal or different treatment directed toward another group is considered discrimination. Often we are quick to make a firm judgement about someone before even knowing them. Parents often pass down prejudice to thier children which
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measuring cylinders ± 1 mL 250 mL standard flasks ± 0.2 mL Errors in experimental work can be classified in three categories: Gross Errors or Mistakes These are due to careless work or apparatus that is temporarily faulty. By being careful and repeating the experiment several times these errors are easily detected and eliminated. Systematic Errors These result from an error in the equipment. They can be eliminated by careful calibration of the instrument. Random Errors These errors arise
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children under a certain age lack abilities to make wise judgment as to what they really want. They are attracted by colourful pictures on advertisement and swayed by misleading information. So they pester their parents to buy those things and this can upset the budget of many families. Even the advertisements of fast foods are bad for children. Children cannot understand that the slim-trim models advertising Mac Donalds burgers hardly ever eat such foods themselves. They are attracted to fast foods
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children’s soccer. Remember‚ you will be speaking for only a few minutes‚ and you will need all of that time to fully develop a single facet of the larger subject. Be sure your topic is timely and relevant for your audience‚ a topic on which you can speak with some degree of authority‚ and one to which you
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injured when fire swept through their hostel‚ on June the 10th‚ the fire is believed to have started from unattended candles.” This is a complete statement but a lot of information has been left out and a lot more detail can be added in succeeding paragraphs. If space is tight an editor can cut out from the bottom and still save the most important details at the top. This style of writing is helpful to the journalist in that it helps journalist come up with better press release this may get a lot of
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Cyber-Crime MC2 Table of Contents Introduction…………………………………………………………………. Nature ………………………………………………………………………… Definition………………………………………………………………………………. Background…………………………………………………………………………… Discussion…………………………………………………………………….. History…………………………………………………………………………… Types of Cybercrime ……………………………………………………… Fraud……………………………………………………………………………………… Bullying‚ Harassment and Stalking…………………………………………. Computer Trespassing……………………………………………………………. Hardware Hijacking………………………………………………………………
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