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I remember that when I was child‚ I saw one public service announcement in the television that was performed by Yul Brynner‚ who was an actor of "The King and I". In an announcement‚ he said‚ "If I hadn’t had smoking the cigarette‚ I would not have talked to you smoking was hazardous the health". An announcement was played after he had died in lung cancer‚ which was caused by smoking. This announcement gave me deeply impression that cigarette was harmful our health absolutely. However‚ how many people
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Smoking Should Be Banned In Public Places Smoking is currently under siege as never before with a spate of high profile health injuries cases. Cigarette smoke‚ a dangerous chemical‚ consists of both active smoke and passive smoke‚ through which people may inhale. Non-smokers meet smokers in many public places like restaurants‚ railway stations‚ buses‚ offices‚ etc. Both active smokers and passive smokers are equally affected. Based on two realistic factors including the health affection and
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who smoke have increase over the years. Although they are equipped with the knowledge of how unhealthy smoking can be‚ people still choose to smoke. It is a personal choice and a highly addictive habit. Smokers choose to subject themselves to the health risks of smoking. It is not for the government or any third party to dictate whether or not a person should be allowed to smoke. However‚ smoking does not only affect the smoker negatively. It also affects all the people around those who smoke because
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Passive smoking is the inhaling of second hand smoke. It is damaging the lungs of thousands of innocent Australians every year. All because some people are addicted and protest that it there right to smoke and endanger fellow workmates in public places. Banns are currently in discussion to finally protect workplace employees from passive smoking. Just think of the stench that embeds your clothing when you exit a nightclub or restaurant. With smoking banns in place‚ venues like these and many others
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Jessica Zender American Government Smoking in Public Places Smoking has been around in our history for longer than we can imagine. It used to be a status symbol and a power stick. A cigarette in ones hand was a gesture of intimidation to others. Movies have always shown the protagonist smoking away while they deal with something important. Even in real life‚ ask a smoker‚ they would say that smoking helps them clear the clutter in their mind and calms them down. However‚ a non-smoker would easily
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Essay: “All research carried out in the past 50 years has proved that smoking is harmful for passive and active smokers alike. A ban on smoking in all public places with immediate effect is therefore the only reasonable option.” Did you ever deeply inhale the cold cloud of smoke of someone standing in a public place? Every one of us faces these situations to a greater or lesser extent. No matter if it happens indoors or outdoors‚ non- smokers never benefit from it. The question is‚ why smokers
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are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think it is a good rule or bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to support your position. Earth is a good creation of God. So this is our duty to make it beautiful. If our surrounding is good and has no pollution then we feel happy and have a good health. A person who is healthy has good ideas. In my opinion I would like to say if smoking is not allowed in public places and office buildings then it is a good
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Smoking In Public Places Smoking has spread all over the world‚ and this habit is not only with adults‚ but also with teenage. When this habit spreads to public places‚ it would cause a lot of problems. Some people think it is okay to smoke in public places. However‚ I think that government should prevent smoking in public places for three main reasons. The first reason is that smoking in public places will be very dangerous for the people around the smoker‚ which is called second
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Smoking in public places Smoking is the phenomenal of inhaling and exhaling cigarettes or hookah‚ people tend to smoke when they have problems or simply if they enjoy it. With time it becomes not only habit‚ but it will easily develop to become an addiction which will ruin the person’s health slowly and could cause death. But we have to respect other people privacy in public places. A lot of people find it cool to smoke in public places‚ but it’s not really any cool because it annoys other people
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