As a college student bad writing is no stranger to me. On my journey to become a great writer I have made many mistakes and you should as well. No Author writes a perfect story the first time‚ It takes a great deal of revision and hours of word choice to make sure the reader comprehends what is intended to be narrated. This can be very difficult and has been for me as a young writer. George Orwell talks about many different examples of bad writing and what makes this writing so bad such as complex
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words‚ but is it really? A picture to me is not a thousand words‚ but a thousand ideas. The idea of a picture itself is so simple‚ yet so remarkable in the way that we can look a picture and instantly relive a previous memory or experience. Pictures are almost a way to freeze time and reflect on who we were then and who we are now. This photograph is not much of an experience‚ but a reflection on my life as a child itself. I had no idea back then that I would be who I am today. I pictured my future
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Many things have helped to shape my identity to make me the person I am. The most influential thing that has shaped me is my culture. One of the biggest pieces of my culture that has done this is my participation in sports. Out of the sports I play‚ high school soccer has shaped me the most. Soccer in high school shaped my identity by making me more social‚ a leader‚ and open minded about diversity. Soccer has guided me in many ways to become the person I am. Especially in high school‚ the sport
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Stranger in the Photo is Me Essay “Say cheese‚” says my mom and click‚ this moment is saved forever. And now taking a photo allows a moment in time to be kept in remembrance. Photos are objects that are cherished; they hold memories‚ both good and bad. Photos allow us to remember the lessons and experiences that make us who we are today. INSERT REST OF PARAGRAPH Looking through my photos in attempt to age one of them‚ I chose this one specifically because this was the only picture that truly
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In the essay‚ “The Stranger in the Photo Is Me” by Donald Murray‚ the structure has a huge effect on the purpose. This is because it helps to further develop the purpose of the story‚ as practically every paragraph has some sort of connection back to the main purpose. The structure emphasizes the purpose throughout the story with examples‚ opinions‚ and historical facts that support what Murray is trying to teach the audience. For example‚ the purpose is shown very clearly in paragraph 12‚ when Murray
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An experience that helped you understand purpose of Life: When God created this universe‚ he created each every particle in it with a certain purpose and with a certain design in mind. And that is what our belief in our religion tells us that no one is superior or inferior in front of Allah but it’s our deeds that make us superior or inferior in front of our creator. Our deeds are determined by our performance in the tasks that Allah gives us throughout our lives. My maturity in conceiving
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19 Who Has an Influence on My Life Throughout life there are many people who influence you. Your family‚ friends‚ teachers‚ coaches‚ and even people who see you only once in your lifetime could influence you. Each person‚ as they grow up‚ changes either for better or even for worse from the impact of others. I am lucky to have to close relatives as my greatest influences in life because they change me for the better every day. The biggest influences in my life have been my grandparents and
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Who or What Identifies You? I‚ myself‚ don’t really know who or what identifies me. I am still at the process of finding out who I really am. I am at a constant struggle with the different personalities that I show whenever I socialize with various groups that I am a part of. “Nothing is permanent” just like what Charlie Chaplin said. I can easily change my personality. With the fact that I can adapt to different social groups‚ I am lost with nothing to hold on to. Lost in the world that I made
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WHO INSPIRES ME Some people think that for someone to inspire you the person still has to be alive. Well in my case I just recently lost the person that inspired me the most. My father‚ he was the person whom I asked about money‚ about how to get better at playing golf and about anything else I needed help with. Wesley Doolen Morgan was a sensitive and caring man‚ who didn’t like to show emotion much. He never said “I love you” to us‚ but we all knew he did. When we needed help with buying school
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How Sports have Helped Me Grow as a Person Football is an extremely dangerous sport that younger kids shouldn’t not play anymore‚ for it teaches nothing good for our youth and it only allows them to hurt each other. In today’s society these are what most of the documents try to display about football. They make it seems as if it is barbaric and good for nothing; only causing harm to our younger generations. What these documents don’t show you is how much good playing football can be for our youth
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