Throughout the semester, the Year Eight class have studied figurative language, Shakespeare, persuasive and narrative writing, as well as reviewing the role punctuation plays in ensuring clarity in writing. Tyson has demonstrated a more focused approach to his English class work the semester, which has resulted in improved performances. However, his work ethic is still inconsistent. In order to improve in the future, …show more content…
Axel is a cooperative student who contributes to class discussions when prompted. He has demonstrated a good work ethic throughout the semester. In order to improve in future Axel will need to work on ensuring that his extended written work follows the correct writing conventions for each assigned task. The opening to his Poseidon myth was biographical instead of in a narrative as the task required. Axel will need to ensure that if he in unclear about the requirements of any assigned work that he seeks clarification and feedback in a timely manner. I wish Axel all the best for next