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Year 11 Personal Narrative
11th July 2011. I was currently at my friend’s house when my mum came and i had to leave. Do you know the feeling when something just doesn’t feel right and you know that something really bad is going to happen? Well I do. My mum came into the backyard when my friend and I were playing. I looked up at her and the expression on her face wasn’t very good. Looking into his eyes you could tell that something was wrong. I will never forget that moment when my Grandfather passed away.
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