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Wrong With Mack
Mack says, "Something's wrong with Josh. He's combed his hair."; Mack tells the kids no, but they still end up at the waterfall.; Mack tells Missy, "I tell you what. ; When we get home, your mom will have a great answer for you.; Mack dives in the lake to rescue Josh.; Nan consoles Mack at the police station.; Mack leaves Willie and drives off in the truck; Mack runs the stop sign.; Papa says, "I am that I am."; Papa says, "I think that's Santa."; Mack apologizes for saying Oh my God.; Mack says, "If only I was smart enough to understand a word she said."; Mack's experience walking on water.; Mack sees Missy through the waterfall.; Jesus says, "It always works better when we do it together."; Papa says, "You have no idea how much I'm doing.";

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